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| "We Can Fall Apart or Fall Together" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Mandy(panchan) On: July 18, 2006 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Loopy, I finally got around to reading your fic. Sorry for taking so long! And I do believe I'm quite hooked already.^^ Your writing style and grammar is perfect. The first chaper was a bit monotonous with everyone feeling for Yuki, yet he was left completely alone. That's the only knick I've come across. I especially liked this chapter because it really pulled me in. Anyways, you'll have to get a hold of me when the next chapter is up.^^
| Reviewed By: demonflame On: June 30, 2006 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, i haven't read a fic that good, well, ever. that one really made me think about tohru and Kyo, and it showed, albeit twistedly, that though Momijji is a kid, he's the more open minded one of the sohma's, and that makes him smarter. Please write more fics like this!
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