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| "It's Our Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] | Reviewed By: Uchiha_kiss On: July 17, 2006 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi you probably never heard from me but i read your stories, unfortantly i could not write a review for any chapters(i read your stories on my cell phone) but i think your story is probably the best i've read in a while. thank you for writing!
| Title: i went too long without reviewing!
Reviewed By: Jamie1317kast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...there are no words for such perfection, i'm running out of things to say. but your writing moves my heart and makes me cry. yes, oh yes, Shigure, you have a heartbeat. " this heart which you say i have not got..." yes, but it was buried deep, oh so deep...
| Title: violin
Reviewed By: Jamie1317kast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwwwww!!! so- cute- must- keep- reading! violins are like that tho, they can move you so completely...so unexpectedly...it's like magic. ah, music, beyond all we do here.
| Title: you've done it again...
Reviewed By: Jamie1317kast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
from the first paragraph of chapter two, you captured my heart yet again. words can't express, i'm telling everyone i know who likes fruits basket about this fic! i can't wait to read the rest. this is how the series should end, that is, if you're not following some strange, cool plotline nobody knows about yet...^_^
| Title: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Jamie1317kast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah! EEEEE!!!! words can't express-! i want to cry, i want to laugh, i want to hug them both!!! *waves arms* that- was- so- CUUUUUUUTE!!!! i've only read the first chapter but i shall now go on to read the rest of them! yes, your style was perfect, it really brought it together. ah yes, kimono do make one feel that way. i would know since i own quite a few myself. to make them, such respect. to wear them? ah yes, it truly is a labor of love, isn't it? she and Shigure really do belong together don't they? no doubt about it, this is the truth. right, i'm going to read the rest now!
| Title: Heartbeat
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shii-chan and Akito have such a bitter sweet love. I'm probablly not right about what this fic is about, but what it means to me is that no matter how cold Shii-chan and Akito are to eachother, their heart's still beat and they're still human. I thought it was a sweet little fic, even if I'm completely wrong about this fics meaning maybe you could tell me what it's about? I enjoyed this fic very much and I hope that you keep writing!
| Title: White Out
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although it was very short I think it would be hard to write a fic that's better than that! That was wonderful! Anyway, it doesn't need to be long, it just has to be good. And that was good! Like I always say, don't mess with perfection. Reading this is like reading a poem, it may be short and may not have a huge intricate story line, but what matters most is the way you write it. This would be a much less enjoyable story if you just wrote, 'Haru lost his curse and his black side, he cried and then watched Mogeta.' See how boring that was? I love your writing style. And this is a good idea for a story, I hope that Haru's curse is lifted soon!
| Title: Tiny Wish
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooray for Hiro Oniisan! He's such a good brother. ^_^ I had forgotten that his curse was lifted, I'm very happy that it was, so now he and Hinata-chan can be happy together! They'll never have to suffer the heart break that the other Jyuunishi siblings faced. And I love how you put Adelina in this fic! That was really cool. I like Adelina-chan, she's a good character. ^_^
| Title: Timid Lioness
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. ^_^ Kisa-chan is so kind, I'm glad she has a friend. Haru and Tohru-kun would be so proud if they knew how brave Kisa-chan had been, defending another girl like that. That part when Kisa's charm was broken was really sad, (kids can be such brats) but when Adelina gave her a new charm, that was really sweet, I could've cried. ^_^ You're SO good at writing Lil-chan! (Can I call you Lil-chan? I guess I should have asked before but I kept forgetting!)
| Title: Fallen Strands
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, that was soo sweet! ^_^ Haru is such a great guy, I'm glad he and Rin are happy together. Lil-chan's fics are SOOO beautiful! (Darn it, I still havn't read any of your other fics, I need to go do that) Anyway, I just want to thank you for sharing your wonderful fics with the world! ^_^
| Title: =)
Reviewed By: Miama-san On: May 17, 2006 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though my writing skills are very poor, I still believe that it was a wonderful piece of writing at it tugs at people's emotions.
| Title: =)
Reviewed By: Miama-san On: May 17, 2006 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though my writing skills are very poor, I still believe that it was a wonderful piece of writing at it tugs at people's emotions.
| Title: Relative Composistion
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was completely wonderful, touching, beautiful and magnificent. I cried, it was so great. You're an amazingly talented writer. I love Momi-chan SOO much! He would do anything for the happiness of Momo and his mother, he's so selfless it makes me cry! He suffers so much and so it's really nice to see him so genuinely happy! Thank you soooo much Lil-chan!
| Title: Stay Together
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good, I love your writing style! It was such a beautiful story, I hope that Kyon-chan can someday be happy like that and forgive his mother. Well that's just about all I have to say (This was an unusually short review) I'm definately putting you on my favorite author list! After I finish reading this next one shot I'll go check out your other fics.
| Title: A Dress? You Jest!
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really very, very good! I enjoyed it alot. I REALLY hate Akito but I think I hate her less recently because now I know she had a hard time too, it's not all her fault that she's an evil psycho. I also liked how this took place after the curse had been lifted, and so Akito wasn't all evil anymore she just had a bad temper. I think that helped me to sympathize with her. Anyway, I'm going to go read the rest of the oneshots and review those!
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