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Reviewed By: wilyfox34 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 07:47 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You succeeding in making me cry. Believe me that is high praise. I just hope that you find a way to save Inu Yasha.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 17:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so great. It was well worth the wait. By the time I finished I was crying. It's saddens me to think Sess will be without Inu, but I happy to see that you allowed them to be together again. If he does die (but, I hope he doesn't ^__^) it's good to see that he brought Inu and kids home. Should I stock up on tissue for chapter 16? Love your story, and take your time writing the next chapter. I know it will be great!~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 08:58 PDT
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omg this is so sad. I'm in tears right now it is so emotional update soon!*tear tear sniffle*
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 21:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think i'm going to cry *sniffles and clings to your leg* you can't kill off inuyasha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >.< T_T Waaaahhh *cries* pppppppppppppppppleeaase update soon!! don't kill him! *cries*
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 20:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 14: Hey! You didn't word that right! It was more action and less storytelling; not less description. Bad you! Keh, a matter of symantics. This chapter is chock full of action. Man, you really have a violent streak. Who killed your puppy? The descriptions were so vivid and there was so much of it that really made me cringe. Of course, that's a good thing. But, before that. Sesshoumaru's behavior toward the children's caretakers was very IC. I liked it very much. Poor Sesshoumaru; not having seen his children in so long and then having to leave them again. And then there is Gin. I feel so bad for him. Damn, girl. You made Kouga into a real bastard. Although I see him as an arrogant idiot, I really don't see him as so cruel. But you did a great job vilifying him. I can see that he has the potential for such violent behavior. My heart ached for Inuyasha, especially when he felt Sesshoumaru near. Speaking of Sesshoumaru. Damn! I would have liked to see him take Kouga to his dungeon for more torture, but what you did was pretty good. Great description. I could hear the sounds of bones cracking and tendons twisting. If people don't know what it feels like, I'll tell you. You want to pass out and throw up at the same time. Your head burns, but you can't pass out do you're stuck in a state of complete misery just because the pain is so great. Wow, reading it made me relive that. Ouch! But poor Inu! He's already at the breaking point and then Kouga hurts him so badly. Haven't you put the poor hanyou through enough already? Why do people like to torture him so much. *sniffle* I hope that things get better for him-one way or the other. Great chapter, lots of meat. Snow
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 19:23 PDT
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Chapter 13: It was nice that the children actually fought back. And oh, Sesshoumaru is so cool when he's kicking ass. I can see how his land would fall into disarray without his mate there beside him. Good thinking. Too bad that the timing was so bad. It was sad Jinenji could not give Sesshoumaru any guarantees. Sesshoumaru's desire to kill Jinenji was very amusing and IC. All of the children are very endearing, especially Gin and Izayoi. They are the youngest and most innocent, and have hearts of gold. Thank goodness for Ayame. She's a real life saver. Let's hope that Sesshoumaru sees it that way. It was so funny when Kameko called out, 'Papa!' and the three adults thought 'Oh shit!' That was so funny. It was a chapter chalk full of meat. Well, written and you make the kids very believable. Off to the next chapter review! Snow
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Title: Fifty Years
Reviewed By: fluffy's girl On: July 07, 2006 19:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ty for updating. this chapter was interesting. inuyasha got raped. that is sad. i wish sesshy came in time. oh well. i still love the chapter and story. i also like that u made koga suffer. its just sad that he died after he realised what he was going. plz update. im a fan of u and what u write. dont disapoint me. i cant wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Fifty Years
Reviewed By: wilyfox34 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 18:59 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In a word--superb. For a more extensive review of this fic see the review I posted at ffnet (wildheartz)
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Reviewed By: Kitsama Rising [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 14:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez was that a read. I'd seen the story up and planned on reading it but it slipped my mind. I'm very glad I did. Your descripion was very...vivid, something I find I have to work on. But I'm glad I read this even if it brought tears to my eyes. I like the way you painted Sesshoumaru. I'm waiting for your update.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood- To lazy to log in On: July 04, 2006 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! Cute chapter. Very nice this time. Please update soon. I cannot wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 19:40 PDT
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omg lol that was sick! in an ok way lol koga got what he deserved fuckin bastard my sesshy showed him! im so happy reunited and it feels sooo goood!! lol update soon!
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Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 19:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, I absolutely enjoy reading the story you've put together. I read a lot of Inuyasha/Sesshomaru stories, and I really like how you've paired these two together. The characterization of both is stunning. I found the way that you had them mated after Naraku's defeat and Sesshomaru's reasoning for doing so to be unique. It was heartbreaking to read when Sesshomaru believed that Inuyasha had betrayed him. The children are written well and I have to say I think Gin is my favorite to this point. The illness that Inuyasha suffers from is also a nice touch. It gives them something more than Sesshomaru losing his temper and Inuyasha fleeing for them to work through upon reunion, and I am anxious to see how you will do just that, now with Koga's rape. I liked the fact that Inuyasha felt distrustful of Sesshomaru around the children and himself, especially considering Sesshomaru's feelings about Izayoi after her birth. The reunion Sesshomaru had with his children was beautiful, and I liked the way the children reacted to him. I loved how he had to realize what a fool he had been all those years ago, too. It is my favorite chapter to this point in the story. For this latest chapter, I sat on the edge of my seat, waiting to see how Sesshomaru would deal with Koga holding Inuyasha captive. I felt awful for Inuyasha during the rape, knowing that he did not want the views others had of him being a whore to be true. Sesshomaru's slaughter of the wolf-demons and his torture of Koga was brilliant and in excellent character. I felt that he had served Koga his justice extremely well. I am anxious to see what happens next, especially when Inuyasha wakes up to realize he is back with Sesshomaru. One more thing, I wanted to review to let you know that I have nominated your story for Best Yaoi at the InuYasha Fanguild. I wish you luck and I look forward to another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 16:18 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff, but YOU have me in tears. I can't believe what I just read. I feel so bad for Inu and Sess. I think Kouga got off light. B reading U!
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Reviewed By: kaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 00:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I'm on edge about what's happening with poor Inu and Koga. And also how Sess is going to correct this pitiful mess he has created. Continue soon! ~Kai
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Title: YAYYY!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 11:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cool! Thanks for the update it really needed that! I've been sooooooooo bored! Wow I should have known that Inu and Sess' kids would kick ass! I'm especially happy that you choose the girls to use their powers the most, great job in showing that even little girls rule! I'm going to let my youngest read this chapter, she been feeling out of sorts lately. She's a feels a little left out by her older sibs, and a little bumed that she's no longer the baby. So, maybe this will cheer her up. It's not easy being 4 is it? I think reading about little girls with power will help boust her! Anyway thanks again, the chapter was exceptional, eventhough you are a tease! BUT, I'll forgive you, as long as you keep the story HOT! Deal? ^_^ Mikkie says hi, she'd only read up to chapter 11 so far but, she coming over to read the rest later. Update soon!~B reading U!
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