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Reviewed By: sahjdude On: August 16, 2006 23:59 CDT
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ok.... in her own world... where shud i start? can't remember any1's name so pardon me... Hia wats her name d older sis Hinata and wats his name...Neji make a cute couple n i feel sorry for them cuz of hiashi's decision :-( (by the way y do all a dem have to b h's?)... so anyways i want a lil sis like hanabi.. an excellent accomplice... but i dunno where i'm gonna get a tenten from! I think the story was excellently pieced together except where hi.... wats her name again?....Hinata gets all smart n beats d heck out of Neji.. almost felt sorry for the poor guy. You really capture the innocence of love where Neji and Hinata are concerned bcuz i cudn help but hit myself on the head when i read how childish Hinata behaves when around Neji and how Neji so easily gives in to her.... (d doing of the hair and the dancing in the rain)...So cute but every relationship has its problems and oh ma gosh i can't believe Hi... wats his name? hinashi?.... no... hiashi is tying to separate them... mayb he shud spy on them with his bathoy.... ah not gonna bother trying to remember how that one's spelt and then he'd see how innocent their love really is. Ps can i have the recipe for hinata's delicious dumplings? :-) But anyways.... abck to the review.... I enjoyed every moment of it and i can say that for all your stories so far... Keep up the good work n hurry up and finish this story!!!!! grrr and work on ADD too, ok? ;-)
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Title: Don't stop!
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 13:08 CDT
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I LOVE this story! And if you quit, I will have to hate you, I am very sorry. Actually.... No I won't.... Just pleasecontinue! Please, please, please?!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 20:22 CDT
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That was a ver funny chapter! I'm still laughing! EVIL SQURREL!
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Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: SilentThunder14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this fanfic and i hope you continue it as soon as possible! My two most favorite parts were when Hanabi was being an annoying little sister in the first two chapters and also when Hinata beat Neji at last!!! Very original idea with the genjutsu, and flower-thing. Over-all, very good job! ^_^
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Title: Y HELLO THARR!!!
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 16:33 CDT
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OMG! Is that the end? If it is: WAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! T_T You should make more chapters or a continuation fanfic! That would rock!!
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Title: her own little world
Reviewed By: shinobicows [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great! 10's all the way
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Title: MOREEEEEEE
Reviewed By: Keri-Jo On: June 20, 2006 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This had such an interesting twist, poor Neji. Write faster.
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Reviewed By: Buffy_Momoji On: June 17, 2006 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this pairing! It's so good! The way you manipulate the characters is great. I like the consept of Neji having to do wahtever Hinata wants him to. I was hoping for something more then just wanting to do his when Hianat was asking for a favor from Neji, but I love it because it wasn't what Neji wanted. Keep wrighting!
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Title: this is really great
Reviewed By: Sarine On: June 11, 2006 04:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good and the 6th chappie was hilarious but don't stop i really want to know wat happens next so please write another chappie soon please
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Reviewed By: flashmangriffin On: May 24, 2006 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty darn good so far, keep writing.
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Reviewed By: konoha_kunoichi723 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 16:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is NOT my fave pairing...at all. But so far it's a good fanfic. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: May 22, 2006 15:27 CDT
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one word: more. this is a really good fic and i have ahard time waiting for the updates, so please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: May 15, 2006 06:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
one word: update! it was extremely well written and i can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: raiia_xx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 16:09 CDT
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=D Really nice, good job keeping the characters in errr...character xD Can't wait till the next Chapter
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Title: Meh
Reviewed By: Randi On: May 13, 2006 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good, so far. The only problem I have is with your usage of the Japanese suffixes. "Kun" is meant for boys, while "Chan" is meant for girls. Aside from that, I give it an average score.
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