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Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2011 13:27 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/nominations/sample-page/ Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. |
Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.. I really loved reading your story. It was really good to put the story in InuYasha's point of view I really liked that. Your story was very different from the ones I have read. I usually read longer stories, but I read the summary and was intrigued. I couldn't help but press the button for the next chapter. The epilogue was realy good and it made me think. Your story was very deep in some ways and very intense. I truly enjoyed reading it and I will deffinitly will be looking for more of your stories:D
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Reviewed By: whiteorchid On: April 25, 2008 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the most intense short story I have ever read! The emotions and the rawness, it was just emotional purging to the max. It was very clever to write the story in Inuyasha's point of view, it made it more real and less frilly happy sunshine! I'm not usually into dark fics, but this one was definitely worth the read!
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Title: Aww man its over!!!
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm usually one to read long stories and just pass up the shorter ones, but after reading this awesome story, it totally changed my view on the length of them. I really loved the ending it touched me!! I really like how you typed the dialogue for Inuyasha, and had all the drama etc fit within 7 chapters! And I'm glad that their lives went on nicely! with the exception of Kikyo, but her death helped them realize that if they continued with their lifestyles they had before, even around the time Kagome saved them,it could of been them being buried. Inuyasha and Kagome are truly in love with eachother I love how you created their relationship,!! Ok this is one of the longest reviews I EVER DONE, but EXCELLENT job, hope to read some of your future fic's =) Hollywood1 OUT
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Reviewed By: Sayuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 22:55 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really liked this! Very powerful story with an even more powerful message. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 18:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Such an awesome ending! Loved it, and can't wait to see what u come up with next!
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Title: .....WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?......
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 14:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsome fic!! I love it, and I adding this to my FAV!!!. Man are the gang f'd up or what? I like how Inuyasha is so in love with Kagome but yet still so stubborn. Great plot and style of writing. UPDATE SOON!!! PLEASE!!!!! I see it's been awhile since you updated! THIS story is to GOOD it be left undone!!!! so hope to read the latest chapter =)
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 19:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic! I just know that this is going to end ip great! Anyway, please update!
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Reviewed By: tempestflame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 12:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOT!! GO INU! GO GET YO GURL!!....ahem,my apologies friend.Didn't mean to get so emo on ya! Update soon Luna-sama!!
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 04:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shit, that was intense. and dark. really really very good story. excellent. and really really real. it's so very real and accurate, it's like living it to read it. I think you have absolutley completely accuratly captured the emotions, feelings, frienships and lifestyles of these characters and these situations, were they real. reading this story feels in no way like reading a work of fiction, but rather a harrowing true-life story. I can't wait to read more and more and more. It's really good. so good i am definatley checking out all of your other stories (though not tonight, it is really late XD) and have high expectations for them ;)
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Reviewed By: nana o. On: October 24, 2006 22:31 EDT
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good story. next chapter pwetty pwease?
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Reviewed By: Lihz On: October 24, 2006 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story and imn glad u updated soo i hope u update soon AGAIN!! lol
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Title: good job!
Reviewed By: necoconeco_1@hotmail.com On: October 24, 2006 16:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! i've read your stories before (and i LOVE them), but for some reason i never read this one... anyway, i had you on my fav list and suddenly an email popped up and said you revised chap 5, so i said "why not? i like the other fics." i've only read chap 1, but i think you're on the right track (yet again). the way you wrote inuyasha's little speech was perfect! i just wanted to encourage you and to keep you happy so i get more reading material! keep your muse happy!
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 10:18 EDT
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love it love it love it love it love it love it I'm in a very shitty mood now, so i can't go into long descriptions of how i appreciate your story,. I just wanna say love it love it love it love it.... So please update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 00:42 EDT
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Oh god. This is an emotional rollercoaster. A very good story, but a roolercoaster.
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Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 02:08 EDT
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hey, awsome fic you have goin. your style of writing is truely unique and the plot is awsome, anyway i love your fic so please keep updating
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Reviewed By: Azalie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 10:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gorgeous. this story is amazing! i honestly can't believe it doesn't have more reviews, it deserves like...100000000? XD it's so raw and angsty- i love it! i honesty found it hard to read cause i wanted to cry, and i do love how it's set up without large chunks. chunks are good, and i do love them in stories, but the way you have your story set up makes seems to suite your writing style really well. you seem to have a real knack for describing emotions without using too many words, i know some writers write alot without actually saying anything at all (i think i do that lol) but this story is fucking awesome! your theme of 'take a gamble' through life thing is really profound too, i don't know what it is, but it had me wriggling in my sleep just thinking about it and how many times in my life i personally fucked up like inuyasha did. it seems strange but this story really hits freakishly close to home and just the thought of how so many things that have happened to me could've been changed by taking the other path from fork in the road. well, just had to return to give you a comment, here's hoping you update soon ^_--
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Reviewed By: Deadly-Crimson On: June 26, 2006 13:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god, so....sad! angsty! I can tell you this is a great fic because only good angsty fics make my stomach hurt like hell. And right now it hurts A LOT. I love this story!! Poor inu. You need to update sooooooooooon!!!
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Title: Crryying
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Owww, I swear my heart hurts just reading the angst in your story, it's reaal good. Just tell me that in the end Inuyasha gets the girl even if he has to go through hell, he deserves it.
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Reviewed By: Rixii On: June 08, 2006 23:15 EDT
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Oooo...we all know which choice Inuyasha will take here, ne? lol Very interesting...very similar to high school in real life though maybe with less physical violence..
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: lIZ1232 On: June 05, 2006 17:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story so far because it has a very good plot to it please update soon
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Reviewed By: valene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holly shit this rules i want more more more ...pretty plz!!!
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Reviewed By: IC On: June 02, 2006 18:52 EDT
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Im luvin ur fic
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Title: inugurl27
Reviewed By: lihz On: June 02, 2006 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey me again and too lazy to sign in but anyway plz update soon cuz i love ur ff JA for now
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Reviewed By: ficfan7 (logged out) On: June 02, 2006 01:44 EDT
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hey just wanted to say you got a cool fic goin on and a unique style of writing it. keep on writin and i'll keep readin.
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Title: lihz
Reviewed By: inugurl27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it and its good to kno why your are doing this to prove that life is an absoult gamble but plz plz plz update soon
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Title: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Seiai(NSI) On: May 17, 2006 16:10 EDT
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ewh, turning point! hehe, that was such a good end to that chappie, but it was still a cliffie =/ heh. still heart you though!
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Reviewed By: Sweet_Obsession09 On: May 17, 2006 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYAAAYYY!! The new chapter was great. If Inuyasha dosn't tell Kagome how he feels, then I am going to bonk him on the head.
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Title: inugrl27
Reviewed By: lihz On: May 13, 2006 13:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg you have to update!!! ur right life IS a gamble and sometimes you have to take that gamble and risk gainig everything or loosing evrything!! well, plz update soon i love it
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Reviewed By: Sweet_Obsession09 On: May 12, 2006 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT. I want to know what happened. IT's very eye-catching. It just screams "READ ME". Please update soon.
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