| "Death comes in many packages" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: Yip
Reviewed By: Speak_of_the_devil On: June 21, 2006 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
YIP! IT IS COOL!UPDATE YOU BUM!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: gcdv not logged in On: June 21, 2006 15:07 CDT
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i like it**************************************** just one question******************************** what happens next!******************************* heres another one******************************** when are u updating?!**************************** bye lol****************************************
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Reviewed By: FV(NL) On: June 21, 2006 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV IT UP DATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update ASAP!!!! GREAT STORY!!
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: June 09, 2006 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS GOOD VERY GOOD YOUR DOIN YOUR OWN THING TOO! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: June 09, 2006 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv your first chapter all the characters are bein themselves. Yes, this is very good.
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Reviewed By: ldychaos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story line. Very original. I'm really enjoying it.
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Reviewed By: SmilingKitsune On: May 22, 2006 22:55 CDT
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This is a good story but I just have a question. Are you purposely changing the way the characters look and if so is there any meaning behind the changes? Otherwise this is a really good story so far, i can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up.
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