| "Infatuation" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Title: Nicely done
Reviewed By: Rikuastin On: June 04, 2006 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your last chapter was fabulous. I desire Kouga/Ayameness as well! But I love your writing so keep up whatever you want to do!
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Title: Another Great One!
Reviewed By: Silver-and-Cold On: May 29, 2006 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME SESS/RIN! I was so happy, and the Inu/kag throughout it all was perfectly done:) YOU ARE AMAZING! Poor Miroku! he better learn to be a gentlemen, to bad he couldn't get advice from Sesshy, cuz hes like aloof, mega hot!!! Can't wait to read your next chapter, you're handling a sampling of a large character count VERY well, I liked the flashes to what everyone was doing it was well done. Update and I shall review and shower you with praise!!!-S&C
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: May 26, 2006 15:37 CDT
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Another enjoyable chapter. It does not matter that you jump around from character to character you're able to pull it off flawlessly.
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Title: Original and great.
Reviewed By: Rikuastin On: May 23, 2006 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...I am in love with this fic! I can't wait to see it continue! Not very many people protray Ayame as anything else but a ditzy love obessesed puppy...But you show her in her true light, that shes a wolf,tough and sexy. It almost seems like shes the seductress of the bunch...but I could be wrong ^__^. I just hope you really continue with this soon, because I'm looking forward to more of your awesome writing! If you ever need any help or when you do update could you email me? Eternal.Session@hotmail.com! I've seen other stories about 'agencies' and this one is on its way up to the top! great work..you should be proud. Ja Ne! Riku
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Title: Excellentay
Reviewed By: Silver-and-Cold On: May 23, 2006 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story!!! if I could give you a higher score than 10 I would!!! please keep updating:)...any possible undercover sess/Rin fluff? That'd be kickass!:) Ps, Ayame and Kouganess is so hot you're already doing great with it!!! YOU RULE SO MUCH! -S&C
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: May 22, 2006 11:53 CDT
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Very enjoyable. It's well written and thought out. A true pleasure to read. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: animegurl_06 On: May 18, 2006 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: May 18, 2006 21:53 CDT
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good chappie.. When u sent me the chappie throught the email I only got to the point of Kagome shooting the arrow so I never did see the rest of the chapter so all in all, this chapter is really good. I like where you're going with this.. I enjoy reading your work. Speaking of work, I finally got me a job.. Working at a place called Mama Vita's its a nice little Italian place.. Well gots to go, I'm gonna try to work on my next chapter of my story.. Then I have to go to bed!
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Reviewed By: Tikaz On: May 18, 2006 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing for a first timer! Plz, continue. writers like you keep me here at this sight. plz...i wanna hear more! by the way, will u be writting a lemon? this story probably wont need one but its something to think about. Any ways...g2bounce, Tikaz
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: May 17, 2006 23:43 CDT
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I just love that Miroku is a hentai even at the most inappropriate of times.And that the girls can hold their own at fighting is a joy to read.
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Title: Infatuation
Reviewed By: Lonely Lady On: May 16, 2006 21:54 CDT
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Right now I would not change a thing. You have a going opening in your plot, the story is moving, and you have fiven us just enough to say hurry up and let us have more, More, MOre, MORe, MORE! I hope that this will be a good, long enthralling tale. Your style and story already reminds me of Quillwing717 and their "Waiting On A Wish", but at the same time is really standing on it's own two feet. Hurry with more. I am adding it to my favorites list right now.
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: BloodRedMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 21:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
love how it's going please update
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope(not logged in) On: May 16, 2006 20:12 CDT
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Wow... I like it a lot. And I hope you keep updating. I want to read the next chapter so bad.
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: May 16, 2006 17:17 CDT
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I like to proof people, I could be ur beta reader. I've done a lot of other beta reading for other people too. If you already have one, great work.. You do have some spelling mistakes but overall I really like ur work, please continue. I've only read the first chapter and I really like it please continue with it. I'm having too much trouble writing my own chapter.. I think I'm going through my writer's block. Well awesome work.
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: ochamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang. I was just about to push the button for the next chapter to show up when I realized that there wasn't one. >.>;; Anywho... I can't wait to see what happens next. *nodnod* The idea of Kagome riding a motorcycle really amuses me, for some reason or another. *cracks up* Well... I hope you find a beta, and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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