| "And Baby Makes Four" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 27, 2002 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you do that? I was enjoying it so much. Thanks for the "clue: about Cha's story, I was getting worried. Keep up the good work, and please write more chapters. I need to know Vegeta's reaction. I just have to know, you understand? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 27, 2002 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaawww, you're so sweet and after reading it, yes, I did understand. I'm really loving this and the way Bulma has decided to be honest with Vegeta. I think she made a wise decision to tell him the truth. I just hope it doesn't backfire on her. Thanks for the info on Cha's fic. No wonder I couldn't locate it-she has another name on FFN. You're right about Saiyan-Jin 44's fic, it's brilliant and a must read for B/V fans. Pls update soon, I can't wait to see what Veggie does after hearing the news (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2002 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
EEP! I said I would finish the fic...um, I didn't. I can't guarantee I can do it tonight, but I'll sure try...I had more to write than I thought...
Anyways, on to what's important. Your story! It's very good! Again! Poor Bulma... Ya know, from the way Vegeta treats Bura I'd say it isn't going to be as bad as Bulma thinks it is.... He might be--shocked, but mad...at her...what for?
Anyways, finish whenever! I'll read it when you get it out, of course! Now, off to read more fics and write my own.... I'm--in a tough spot...I HATE the Ginyu Force....whoops. (goes off laughing evily) |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2002 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know. I like what I read though. I am trying something new while I review, and it isn't very easy. I need to know why would Vegeta be mad, if he help create the baby? I am having a hard time with this new way of reviewing, you'll have to forgive me. |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2002 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. & i can't wait for part two. |
Reviewed By: Sarah On: March 23, 2002 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sounds great. i hope you keep adding to it. i'd like to find out what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 22, 2002 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good start. Keep going. |
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