| "And Baby Makes Four" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: silverdragon On: May 16, 2002 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was really wonderful! I don't know what else to say. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2002 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super! If I could be Bulma for five seconds...she's got it so good! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not filling much like reading a hentai, but I liked it anyways. I am glad you finally updated I was starting to get a little bit scared. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was a great fic! Plus I scored. (Eyes look up at title. Well another me but any ways one part is better then none. |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 12:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Really good, they stayed in character and the story line is pretty good. Keep it up |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 04, 2002 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah! (fans self) Is it hot in here or is it just me? lol Very good. See, I knew he wouldn't take it the way she thought he would take it! I'm good at this stuff.... Wakarmas a lot with this about Trunks.
Guess what? I have updated 3 of my stories and you have not checked them! lol J/K I know you're busy! Lord knows I am too! But I simply love your reviews! So, please? (puppy dog eyes)
I'm off now.... Working on Phyrric actually. You're right. I just can't keep B and V apart no matter what I do! (sigh) But I can make it my darkest fic yet! (sadistic grin) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 04, 2002 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Damn, that was good!! Makes me wanna have a cigarette, and I don't even smoke! Great chap. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2002 04:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Didn't have to tell him twice....naughty naughty girl! Man, I had to skip the--racier stuff, lol.... Nice. You ended on sort of a cliffie.... And yes, I do understand the detail problem.... I swear, I'm trying to get the stories out.... School and work are getting in the way... lol Okay, I'll stop with the periods.
I like, again. Of course (rolls eyes). I always did love Bulma seduces Vegeta scenes. Do you visualize like me? (smirk) lol, that's probably why i don't do lemons. Anyways, more! Soon? At least one of your other stories at least. i simply love your writing!
I left the enjoyment blank because they don't have an 11. ;) |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 27, 2002 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you do that? I was enjoying it so much. Thanks for the "clue: about Cha's story, I was getting worried. Keep up the good work, and please write more chapters. I need to know Vegeta's reaction. I just have to know, you understand? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 27, 2002 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaawww, you're so sweet and after reading it, yes, I did understand. I'm really loving this and the way Bulma has decided to be honest with Vegeta. I think she made a wise decision to tell him the truth. I just hope it doesn't backfire on her. Thanks for the info on Cha's fic. No wonder I couldn't locate it-she has another name on FFN. You're right about Saiyan-Jin 44's fic, it's brilliant and a must read for B/V fans. Pls update soon, I can't wait to see what Veggie does after hearing the news (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2002 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
EEP! I said I would finish the fic...um, I didn't. I can't guarantee I can do it tonight, but I'll sure try...I had more to write than I thought...
Anyways, on to what's important. Your story! It's very good! Again! Poor Bulma... Ya know, from the way Vegeta treats Bura I'd say it isn't going to be as bad as Bulma thinks it is.... He might be--shocked, but mad...at her...what for?
Anyways, finish whenever! I'll read it when you get it out, of course! Now, off to read more fics and write my own.... I'm--in a tough spot...I HATE the Ginyu Force....whoops. (goes off laughing evily) |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2002 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know. I like what I read though. I am trying something new while I review, and it isn't very easy. I need to know why would Vegeta be mad, if he help create the baby? I am having a hard time with this new way of reviewing, you'll have to forgive me. |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2002 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. & i can't wait for part two. |
Reviewed By: Sarah On: March 23, 2002 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sounds great. i hope you keep adding to it. i'd like to find out what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 22, 2002 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good start. Keep going. |
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