| "A New Twist" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice update! I like that Inuyasha was able to no only tell Kagome how he feels about her, but also able to articulate his feelings on Kikyo and hopefully put Kagome's mind at ease about it. I can't wait to see how the date goes and how Inuyasha takes the restaurant and the arranged transporation. He seemed to take the mall and Kagome's "friends" well. ...what is Inu going to do about his ears while they are in the restaurant? Isn't it near the Full moon around this time? so there's no hope of the moonless night transformation. Eh, I better cut it out before I write a ten page report on it. I'm just so exited that you updated and I can't wait to see this next chapter and then to see how Sesshy and Ether are doing! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... glad that inuyasha & kagome spent time together... and inuyasha confessed... hope kagome does too... hope it's inuyasha's turn to claim his mate, kagome... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... now that sesshoumaru & ether are mated... will he meet the higurashi's on the other side of the well... wonder what their reactions will be... what about inuyasha & kagome... will inuyasha be affected since it's mating season... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love the story. The latest chapter was great! I'm sorry to have to point this out though... it's Sesshoumarus's left arm that was lost, not the right one. There are a few minor... oddities at the beginning of the story which trouble me. I'm sure that somethign could be done to make these go away without altering the whole story, but it might lengthen the first chapters. If you want to talk about it then I'll take the time to look it over again and throw some ideas your way. I REALLY like this story otherwise I wouldn't bother pointing out such things.
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Reviewed By: kagome9854 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The more i read this story the more i like it.Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good!!! More Please!!!!! love the Southern lords Daughter... or more of the fact that she is that annoying.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story please continue!
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Reviewed By: kagome9854 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whines* hey thats not nice.:( clifhangers are evil.
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Reviewed By: kagome9854 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! Update soon please!!
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Title: goooooooooood
Reviewed By: ROXAN On: May 25, 2006 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is goooooooood. I like this story.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Michelleinugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10/10! Hey hey hey! I love your storie it rocks. if you wrote stories i bet they would rock! I love your words. and stuff i wish i was a good speller like you i cant spell ... -smiles!
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Reviewed By: dragon_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: marbear411 (not logged in) On: May 23, 2006 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE I HAVE BEEN READING IT AND I LOVEEEEE IT!!! PLZ UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story!!! please update quickly!!!
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