"Heart and Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Sunshine and Puppies Reviewed By: Sunshine and Puppies [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 02:48 CDT Comment/Review: Thanks.
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Title: wow... Reviewed By: RedWeather [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 12:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: this is some twisted stuff. GOOD twisted stuff though~! i'm not all that experianced a writer myself, and i just recently worte my first story, but, wow... :3 this deffently deserves an A+++ :3
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Title: Forgot to mention... ^^' Reviewed By: Ryuuko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 10:00 CDT Comment/Review: Yeah... ^^' As you may - or may not, watevva - have noticed I was talking about the second chapter... Sorry for not making that clear... ^^; The first chapter is also good, don't get me wrong, but for some reason - don't ask why, no one will ever know - I like the second chapter even more! Anyway, I stand by what I said; keep up the good work!!! XD
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Title: ^^ Reviewed By: Ryuuko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 09:55 CDT Comment/Review: Cool! Philosophy like that is GREAT!!! XD Really makes you think... Maybe a little too much... I need sugar or something... o.o Anyways, keep up the good work! X3 *goes to the cupboard to find something sweet*
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Reviewed By: Xing Fai the Feline Blaze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 23:21 CDT Comment/Review: I do so love the way you portrayed Demyx! And you got Axel pretty well too!
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Title: 0_o Reviewed By: Day4Me [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 10:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I clicked and expected to see a train wreck. I saw a train wreck. Who knew that Demyx of all Nobodies could make a train wreck so sexy? *amazed* I'm not one for nappy angsty rape-ish fics, but this... *shudders* This is good stuff. Disturbing, but very good stuff. (and if this is short, it's because I'm used to critiquing pics, and one gets a lot less leeway with that)
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