| "Lemon Twist" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woof. I love how you write, Feni! Body language is a great addition!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. Loved the whole thing goin on there between them and him trying to find a way to fix it. I always did love your version of lemaonade. :P
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Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 14:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dat was da shit
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Reviewed By: yurathewicked [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the last story is amazing and hot and just great. not original, like you said, but still very well written. thanks for writing :)
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha...standing up for his wallflower until the last second! As always, I love your writing!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 17:38 CDT
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I really liked that Kagome kneed and bit Inuyasha; a girl's got her self-respect, after all. One comment: I always assumed Inuyasha's pubic hair would be black like his eyebrows. One question: Why did Inuyasha wait 3 years?
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Title: Oh....That Sword!
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great one liners, great sex and - OMG! a lightbulb goes off in Inu's head - right between those sensitive little ears! You go girl! (more more!)
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Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I stated in your live journal this is a really fun read. Excellent job on it. ~QueenTatooine
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Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 14:34 CDT
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I love random smut. Very nice. This was well written and fun, I had to check back to make sure that it wasn't actually in the main story line, but once that was assured I could stop worrying about the pup somehow finding out. Good job. ~QueenTatooine
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Title: Rin/Sess
Reviewed By: aisho [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 16:30 CDT
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I loved this story. It was an excellent example of your artistic abilities. I like the way you use darkness throughout the story, as well as how you start and end with the hair curling on the mat - at first alone and then together - it is a very good example of circle writing, congratulations. This story leaves you with a sense of completeness and hapiness drawn from the characters clear emotions. Good job, keep it up. I also must say I liked this one much more than "Paperwork," though at this moment I can't find words to clearly state why? Sorry for the lack of help that that sentiment will give you but what can you do?
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH HAA...I LIKED IT..... Oh yea I did :P....Was so waiting to see Yash-centric on getting some :D He SOOOO deserved it, don't you think? I sure as hell thought so. Great lemony goodness there I must say. Have only one question: Where the hell is the rest, lol.....Im like goin on, gettin into it, then...zero, blank, Nada, nothing, zip, zilch (did i leave anything out here, lmao) A just 'Mine" came from him as he was doin all this here, and she was doin all that there...and here I am lookin for more....ARGH!!! It was a really good lemon though. Of which I enjoyed immensely. You have appeased me for the moment (still has vivid images of chapter 43 and 44 :P) Heh, does Nokomarie the Snake get paid to test-drive these lemons, lol? If not, she should, lmao....
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Title: Hooray!
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exceedingly fine lemon-writing! Simply beautiful, moving and arousing. Kudos and please do write more! Good straddling too [the imps have set me free!]
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a fairly good story. Not the most original, but not many things are these days. It was a very nice read. There aren' many authors like you anymore. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
your story is well written. And it is enjoyable. :)
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Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank god your friend wanted this cause it was great! loved it loved it loved it :) You're great I'm glad I have you on my fav authors... Keep up the good work.
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