Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: Val Kyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
...thought the first half was a bit boring, as I have no interest in characters not part of the Ouran world. Alas, reading further made the world go round and round so much that here I am, writing you a review that may or may not bring a certain smile to your face. Brilliant way of introducing Hikaru and then Kaoru. Maybe you could have fleshed out the atmosphere of the place by describing it beyond the antics of a bumble bee (cute, by the way), but hey, it was still pretty good.
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