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Reviewed By: suelias [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 19:41 CDT
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Kagome is too bitter right now that I was half expecting her to shoot Inuyasha with an arrow like Kikyo did. And she has change so much. Inuyasha for the other part seems to be exactly the same as he was before - may be not much of a loud mouth - . How are they going to reconnect now? And their fights are not petty as they used to be. It will take a lot to unite them again. Well, she'll have to stop yelling and he'll have to start talking, actually talking. Specially, he has to tell her he didn't 'stay with' Kikyo as she thinks he did. And he better tell her soon, because I'm still expecting her to shoot him with an arrow. Any way, you're doing a nice work. And I have to applaud you for the way you presented Kikyo: just a jealous girl instead of an evil witch with a dark heart. And Kouga was a darling too. I can't believe Sessh is playing Celestine. But, the part that has me astonish is that Myoga is married. I don't understand how that happened! Well, this had to be a long review, because I just found your fic and I really liked it, even when I don't like Kagome very much right now. It's just she doesn't seem to be her. I know people changes and she has a right to be mad at Inuyasha, it's just. . . I don't know. The thing is I'm hook up to your story and I can't wait to see how it develops.
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 15:17 CDT
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dang it! and here I thought they would end up in a drag out fight with youkai inuyasha loving every minute of it...so whens the next update!?? PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in, remembering the days the computer saved the name and thus spared me that extra minute of work I won't put down to log in and yet I write all of this...stupid me. On: July 23, 2007 15:13 CDT
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NO! BAD Inuyasha! Don't come bossing around using brute strength and think that you know what's best! As Kagome said: She's not playin' dress-up or anything, she's the powerful miko who can quell the evil side of the jewel by merely saying "quiet you!" - AND she's a demonslayer! Now put the raging woman down and suffer through her wrath like a good man and then stop to think about a thing or two. Kagome has no idea why she's there, something her discreet little scream should have hinted, so how about helping her finding that out? And by the way, ink's not the best way to blend in... OK, so this was more of a personal comment to the fictive Inuyasha but still. Ranting shows I'm into the story! Good job!
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for answering the el gato question! Always nice to learn something new. Yeah, I hate the lisp, too. Awesome story, btw! Definitely one of my favs. I can't wait to see how you work out all of these little plot twists--well, the Kagome/ Inuyasha situation, the well, and the disappearing stuff at Sesshomaru's.
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Reviewed By: black flame kitt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 14:25 CDT
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i like this chapter very much i like it more than the last one so keep up the good work i want to read more of it
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww Inuyasha got it good XD and he dervsed it!! anyways oooo Kagome can kick ass now XD hehehehe anyways hope their will be fluff soon :P
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Title: Updating is good!
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha that had to sting....I feel so bad for him....it should have work out but now that Kagome is stuck there and Inuyasha Knows that she is there now he may have a chance to get back to gether with him.....sigh...I realy up that is the case because the belong to oneanother....its just not right to seperate them in such a way.....sigh..I hope you update soon this is going to kill me if I don't get to read more...and this is an excuse not to play video games with my little brother....sigh* he is ubsested with killing games....sigh....please up date soon .............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 09:33 CDT
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YES! Kagome relies on her own strength, YAHOO! I want the two of the to work together and be a couple, but not until they both have settled down in their new roles. I really love how you let Kagome spell it out for Inuyasha: you have no say anymore. I must say I also liked how Inuyasha doesn't start with objecting but keeping focus on what's important to him: Kagomes safety. Now he just must realise that his previous actions can't be repeated and figure out a better way - one that won't make Kagome despise him. Extra credit to Sesshomaru for being a drama master and setting the whole thing up and bonus to Kouga for realising for the first time when to slipt the scene. And of cause, gold to you for being the author! JOY!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 06:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*breaths in quickly* Inuyasha such a asshole at times -_- it never really chanes dosent it? -_- anyways i actually LOVED how they were met XD a nice few sits on the way and its all good :P plus i di hopw we get some fufflyless some time soon :P would love to read it lol and im a few chapters behind 500 >.< the mailing here is shit lol anyways please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story!!! I am totally hooked!!! I really cant wait to see what happens next. Please please please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRRRRrr they finaly meet .....Inuyasha you defintly suffer from foot in mouth disease.....gosh that is sooooooooo not kooo..they were suppose to be happy.....but judging my the missing sword I would have to say that Inuyasha doesn't go on that trip.....yes that is sooo good I realy didn't want him to leave......Inuyasha and Kagome always fight so they will get back together right...RIGHT?? I have a heavy heart right now I want them to be together....and Koga needs to stop quorting her and go back to Ayame.....*sob* please update soon........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 15:01 CDT
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Awesome story!!!! I loooove it! And I love how you handle things w/ Kouga. ^_^ Very creative and convincing story! btw, "el gato" is, literally, "the cat." "El diablo" would be "the devil." Unless, of course, "el gato" is slang or something that I don't know about!
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Reviewed By: black flame kitt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 13:51 CDT
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i cant wait to read the next chapter so i hope that you will get it out as soon as you can i really like your story although kagome and inu meeting could have been fluffier but i liked it anyway
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Title: TY for updating
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why didn't Sesshoumaru tell Inuyasha what he found....oowwwwwwwww....This must be part of Sesshoumaru's plan....uuuuuuu what is Sesshoumaru's plan??.......Hmmmmmmmm he planed it soooo much as to tell Kagome to go to the well in her own time.......this is real starting to bug me when is Inuyasha and Kagome going to find eachother....*sob*.....Please update soon.......Nyuka
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 05:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW MY SESSHY HAS HIS ARM BACK ^.^ ooo are you going to have Inuyasha run into Kagome, Koga etc etc?? that would be neat :P anyways BEST as EVER!!!!
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