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Reviewed By: Child Xylia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 23:57 EDT
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Well, it took me a while to noticed you updated. ^_^ I've read Chapter 19 on FanFiction.net, and I gotta say, for someone who's never had a cigarette before that was a very accuarate description. For some reason, I always have little images of Ed as a smoker, though I never actually want him to be one because it would take away from his character and it wouldn't be so in character (but I liked how you did it.). I blame this little somking obsession on our culture and too much Cowboy Bebop and Quentin Tarantino. =D Anyway, I love the story so far and I can't wait to see when you've updated next.
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 02:28 EDT
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This is extra good! I love it! You're so much better at FullMetal Fan fics than me...sulk sulk. But I dont care! This is great! Keep writing! Please dont keep all your loyal fans waiting!
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Reviewed By: Arbitrary Doom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 00:09 EDT
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.....awsome story!.....good charicter development........but the question of what Ed gave up is killing me.......as well as the thing about the jacket and the pants not fiting......its all very interusting......keep up the good work..........XP!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: catmoongirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 00:07 EDT
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Oooh, don't leave me hanging! I don't want Mustang to get snuffed! Gah! Such a short chapter, but my mind is reeling! I can't wait for the next chapter, just reading your fanfiction fills me with enough inspiration to continue work on my own. Great job once again with emotional portrayal. I do hope you work with Roland more. His character seems very flat, but promising. I'm very interested to see what he turns into.
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 23:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well I just knew Al wouldn't do anything for those new group. He and Ed may be on the outs right now but I'm sure the thought of fighting against the currant military and having to face his brother on opposite sides had to go through his mind. Not only that but all those people he knows and were on friendly terms with, fighting against them? I just can't see Al doing that, he's a soft-heart person who connects easily with others. He fights to protect those he cares for not destroy. That Rolond guy bugs me though, he has seen Ed? And he smiled when someone meantioned the Elrics . . . creepy. I loved how Winry supported Al, letting him make his own decisions and speak his own mind, but still standing strong by his side. They seem of the same mind set, they do make a good couple don't they? LOL, Roy had Ed forging his name. Hmmm, wonder what he made him promise to do? A rub down? A special meal? Don't believe it's sexual, it just didn't come across that way; well at least to me it didn't. Well, guess I'll have to wait and see. Great update as always, looking forward to what comes next from you. Keep up the good work, hope everything is going well for you and your not to stressed with all you got to do. Take care.
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 09:03 EDT
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great chapter, loved the roy/ed interaction. hmm, so now the people from the peoples government are in Reizimbol huh? not good, i wonder what al will do with the information, he wasn't really part of the military but surely he has feelings for those he was around all those years with his brother. well, now envy is on the spot huh? i wonder what izuma is going to think about russell and fletcher. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: catmoongirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! I absolutely loved it! Normally, I find shallow, pointless Ed/Roy fics, but you have written one that surpasses that dominating Roy and manipulated Ed cliche. I'm an author and an FMA fanfic writer myself and I hope it makes you happy to know that your fantastic ability to so vividly express emotion and inner turmoil is something taht I desperately aspire to. I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 19:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hmmm...did i like this chapter? dee,deedee...of course i liked it! but i'm partial i believe cause i like everything of yours i've read so far. very good chapter so happy to see ed open up to roy finally. it seems whatever it that ed gave up to save al and put him back the way he was is really eating the poor boy up. hmmm, does this mysterious act have to do with a lot of ed's distress lately? or at least has been the finale straw to where he is unable to take anymore? does that act some how have to do with what is going on with russell and fletcher? though roy wasn't use to play a psycologist he didn't do so bad. can't wait to see what you have planned next. thanks so much for the update! have a great day.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiTenshi (too lazy to log in lol) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 15:24 EDT
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awesome! but wait.... What did Ed give up??!!! HMMM????!!!!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 22:52 EDT
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yay i have time for an actual review! Aww Winry is warming up to Al *gets all fuzzy inside* so cute. and Ed, oh he's so stubborn, but Roy is too. they need to suck it up and tell each oher how they feel... or its gonna blow up in their face... "His jacket was feeling uncomfortably tight recentlyââ'¬Â¦ He frowned. Not just his jacket, but his pants were tooââ'¬Â¦" -- Hmm..... what is that suppose to imply.... HMMMM *thinks*
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 15:58 EDT
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very good chapter. well, does roy finally have ed where he wants him? will he finally get some answers this way? poor ed, he has so much self doubt and hate, he wants to run away from everyone...hmm, i guess he doesn't see that as anything similar to what his father did huh? so that was roy's concenious maes talking to him...it has some points but nothing that can't be over came. al and winry was a nice break, things are progressing nicely between them. keep up the great work. here's hopeing MediaMiner is finally accepting reviews again
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 05:18 EDT
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Youve updated! Yaay! I was so excited! Im a big fan of your fan fics and I just want to say yaay! And they're great! And keep going! And I love Ed and Roy despite their little quirks...I love it! Keep writing! Yaay! Oh, and this might be a little late cause I havent checked the net for a while but happy birthday! :-)
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 15:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good chapter as always. hmm, what is going on here? poor fletcher and russel, they always seem to get into trouble and on the wrong side. loved that fletcher followed his brother. this war sounds like the beginnings of another isbal. loved the shot hawkeye gave ed. boy, she got him with that one. ed has a lot of explaining to do, doesn't he? well, i can't wait to see how mustage gets the information out of ed and what is going on with this war. thanks for the update, I had been wondering where you were. keep up the good work, I look forward to more from you.
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Reviewed By: The Cerulean Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 23:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your writing is brillant. I love your FMA fics; all of them seem to strech the characters to their full potential. To be quite honest, I've never been a fan of yaoi fanfiction. It always seems to come off as dominatrix-esque. But you make it seem real, heartfelt, and as an actual relationship between two people would exist, not as some hormonal rampage. Bravo. Please keep writing. I wish more people here could weave a story like you.
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 11:25 EDT
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Happy B-day ZaKai, loved how roy was thinking about maes and their times together. how maes had helped him and his determination to be there for ed. sometimes just having another living soul who understands and can give you an anchor in life helps, right? the al and winry part was well done. it was a sad little chapter but, well written and was a great read. thanks again for giving us all a present on your birthday. i'm off to read the other one now.
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