| "Kingdom Hearts Coming Out" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Title: dude love it!
Reviewed By: Pink Octopus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2010 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude i totally love this story man! keep writing dude!
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Reviewed By: Pacifica2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I vote for Itachi/serif they might be cute good story 2
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Title: expand on talent/ vote
Reviewed By: DanteThePoet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The characters are unique and the story is interesting. I feel alot of emotion from Serif and I can relate her situation to a period in my life when I had a similar social problem. However I think the entrances are a bit ridiculous. If possible I would try finding a more realistic approach. Overall i think that this is a great fan fic and you sholud definitely write more. Answering your "fan-based question" I think it should be Serif/Itachi or Riku I'm not sure.
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Reviewed By: red3 On: March 22, 2007 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read chaos conplex befor i read this one and i agree with you and i can't wait to here how you conteny this but it's been a ayear since you last updated i'm not cretesizing or eney thing i love how you wreight ps: i suk at spelling plz bar with me
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Reviewed By: CatNeko13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
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Title: take your time
Reviewed By: cartmanslawyer@yahoo.com On: December 13, 2006 09:15 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm a big fan of your work and I just wanted to say that you don't have to hurry, just take some time off to relax.I'm not one of those over obsessed people that wants you to hurry to much,so please take a short hiatus(or a big break) and don't let crappy reviews or crazy people or flying monkeys or anything for that matter keep you down. Keep on truckin.
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Reviewed By: Jinto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i found a few things that bothered be...its a great fic so far might of taken me all day to read it...YAY for thanksgiving :P the funny thing is i had to use wikipedia a billion times to figure out some of the Naruto chars seeing as i haven't seen it much anywho who to see more of this..maybe next chapter ill be able to laugh...darn late hours/house asleep :/
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Title: kh2
Reviewed By: dragoonice1993 On: November 11, 2006 19:48 CST
Comment/Review:
its funny. when i started to read this my brother played sanctuary and started to play KH2. Im the best at that.recognize!
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Title: Vote
Reviewed By: Dark Angel 673 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Serif and Riku!!!!!! Also, great story. Keep updating!!! ~Akira-saama~ Ja ne
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Title: story
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well after reviewing your story I learned a few things about it. I'll keep them to myself though. But anyways I felt that in the first few chapters things were rushed a little too fast and that the people in there probably couldn't and wouldn't get along even if they tried yet they did. To me that is a change of character and to certain people, an insult. I mean no offense though but I must also give you your props. I liked the fact that you stood up for Naruto in the story and those would've been my exact words if I had spoken them. I have added your story to my favorites and still you have my attention. Your Friendly Neighborhood Reviewer FFXInuyasha1
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Title: vote
Reviewed By: The_Haku_Story_Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
id like serif 2 b with itachi, that would b a good comple right there!
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Title: ROCK ON!
Reviewed By: The_Haku_Story_Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UR STORY ROCKS ON HARD! keep it up! heh ur story makes me wanna work on my own! but man i luv it! whatever ur doing, dont lose it! ROCK ON!
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Title: update...
Reviewed By: animegurl9164 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
kay thats interesting...lol riku and serif pweese! *pouts* lol update soon!
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Title: Ummm................
Reviewed By: Isabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 20:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I vote for Riku and Serif. I love Riku and Itachi so either of them will be cool. or you could put Neji in and have him with her. It doesn't matter to me.
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Reviewed By: animegurl9164 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 19:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool! UPDATE ASAP! looks interesting...SO FAR! oh and for the vote thingy i was Serif/Riku! :D
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