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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: Fairytalechic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 01:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great fic. i hafta say it's one of the best i've read in a long time on MM. i really enjoyed the uniqueness of it, and the way the characters are potrayed. the setting and time is fantastic and believable. it's incredibly written, and i really enjoyed reading the first 4 chaps. i hope to read more soon. i've added this story to my favs so that i'll know when you update! can't wait for more ^_^
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 03:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE LEMON1!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 02:31 EDT
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BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE HOW YOU KILLED KOUGA!! PRICELESS!!! ~er-hem~ Well uh...great story! cant wait for an update!!
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Reviewed By: Witch Demon DD On: July 07, 2006 12:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm Loving it, please continue to write and update!
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Reviewed By: Rinlover(offline) On: July 03, 2006 18:34 EDT
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Ahh, You see, I too am from Minnesota. This is a fantastic story, and I hope that you continue to write it! It's really really really raelly really really really really really really realy really really really really good. HURRY AND UPDATE DAMN YOU! (And sorry to hear that you are in Kansas, too boring. I'll bring a lake to you ^^)
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-fan007 On: July 03, 2006 16:15 EDT
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I forgot to ask that you get help with your grammar. You do not know how to separate paragraphs correctly. Two people should never speak in the same paragraph. Every time someone new speaks, a new action occurs, the point of view changes, or someone new thinks something, a new paragraph should be created. Look in a printed novel (paperback or hardcover) and see how the dialogue and action is broken into small paragraphs. Go look at one of Sueric's fanfiction stories here on MediaMiner and follow her example of formatting paragraphs. I think more people would read and review your story if the correct grammar and paragraph structure was used. I hope that helps. Good luck with you story.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-fan007 On: July 03, 2006 16:06 EDT
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This is pretty good so far. I noticed in your author's note that you said you got complaints but I also noticed that you added a warning (which was not there before) in one of the chapters about the non-con sex and violence. I think if you warn people up front that rape or non-consensual sex issues exist in a chapter (no matter how mild the description), you can take away their right to complain. Always give proper warning and/or labels to your story and chapters and no one can point their finger at you. People get mad when they read something they did not expect to see, so warn them up front and they have no right to get mad. You are doing fine with your story so please continue. I find it very interesting.
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Title: awsom,e
Reviewed By: dewrse On: June 09, 2006 12:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it! very very original so please continue to write more of this fic and don't worry if you get enough reviews. This fic is a jewel, a diamond in the ruff. I hope more people will discover what a good story this is. Please update soon. thanks, adamile
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Reviewed By: Little Owl On: May 25, 2006 14:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good start, loved the little details you gave for Kouga and Kagome's meetings, please keep Kagome safe from him and more importantly PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! this story deserves to be reviwed by its readers.
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