| "Mark of a Goddess" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 20:50 CDT
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thanks for explaining everything. I am still alittle confused about hitomi, is one of her powers is that she can see into the future? Anyways great chapter as always. Thanks again for the update and update again soon. Lots of love.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 22:53 CDT
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Great chapter. I don't remember Hitomi having a brother. Is it her real brother or her "Tarot" brother? I love the fact that she understands why Chid had bought her there. She is the other person in the portrait of the Sun God. But i thought she was the Goddess of the Moon. I am a little confused. Until til next update. lots of love.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 22:21 CDT
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The chapter is a little wierd but great. I love how you gave a little background to Drydens Tarot user ablities and his past. Oh, how a man whore he was. If Hitomi is open-hearted, like i think she is, she will still be Dryden's friend no matter what. I still hope everything is ok in the Van/Hitomi relationship department. I have been thinking about Chid's decision to let Hitomi decied Folken's fate. Maybe this is one of his "judgements"? Maybe Chid wants to see how Hitomi will react and see what she will do with the situation that she is presented with. Well, I will only know the answer to my questions in the next update hopefully. Lots of love.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 21:14 CDT
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There is no freaking way that i am ever going to get bored with this story. When i read the last chapter that you put up, my heart broke for Hitomi and Van. I hope they don't spilt up. It took them alot to get together. I love the way you write, its great. Until next time, lots of love.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 14:28 CDT
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Awesome. Great chapter. I know how Hitomi feels at night when you hear all the little sounds in a dark quiet room. i wonder if she is going to warn Folken or not. The judgement card, does that mean that the Sun God can pass judgement on anybody and give them the punishment that they deserve? Wow, can't wait until next update.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 16:48 CDT
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Wow. Just great. I really like this story alot. I was one of the people that always read and never wrote a review. I could never find the right words to write how i really felt about a story. I just can't believe that Chid is the Sun God. I wonder what is going to happen to everyone when everything is said and done. Is Hitomi going to warn Folken about tomorrow? I can't wait until the next update. You are great!! Lots of love.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 13:29 CDT
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Thank you, thank you. Great chapter. What an argument betwen hitomi and van. He is so pissed off!!! Dryden's back with the sun god, whats going to happen next? Thanks again for updating and please please update soon. Lots of love.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 21:39 CDT
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Ecellent, love the story. Keep up with the updates. Your story is amazing. Great chapter. Lots of love.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 20:50 CDT
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Awesome, awesome, awesome. Fan-freaking-tastic. I love the story. I wonder what Hitomi and Floken are going to talk about? Maybe he still wants her to be his? Until next time. Thanks again for updating. Lots of love.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 20:46 CDT
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AHHHHH!!!! So great!!!! I can't believe that Hitomi did all that. I can't believe that she tricked Van into letting her lock him up on the bed. I just hope she knows what she is doing. I love the way you write. Its great. I wish i could write like that, i really suck at writing. Thanks for updating again. I cant wait until you update again. Lots of love.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 18:34 CDT
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Ahhh. What a great chapter. Sometimes i think that Van is a little bossy to Hitomi but then is is always so sweet to her. I wonder what he said to Merle when they were alone. Please continue. Lots of love.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 13:44 CDT
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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish i could write like you. I love you lots for updating. I did not like the fact that they had to "test" Allen, but i guess they had to do it to make sure he was worthy enough. I hope that Hitomi tells van what is wrong with her soon. Thanks again for updating, you are my hero. LOL.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 13:03 CDT
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Thank you, thank you, for writing an update. i wanted to let you know that i love your stories and i hope that even if i am the only one reading that you will continue to update. I hope that van and hitomi will be able to have children or that she is not immortal.
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Reviewed By: Mikokissi On: May 08, 2007 21:07 CDT
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I wanted to let you know that i love this story. It's Fan-freaking-tastic. I have been reading it from the beginning and wondering when you will be updating the story line. Please, please, please update. Thanks
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Title: finally reviewing
Reviewed By: Isabela23 On: June 24, 2006 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Sapphirefly! I have to admit that I am one of those who have been reading and not reviewing. ::puppy dog eyes:: sorry sorry! Although, I haven't been in on your story from the beginning bec. I discovered it not too long ago. I actually decided to start reading in the middle of Mystic Wings. I think I read a chapter or two, loved it, and decided to start from the beginning. I stayed up all night till about 6 am the next morning. I am officially addicted! lol I really hope you don't drop this fic! I read a statement you posted elsewhere that you are taking some time off, for other reasons, and are a bit frustrated from lack of reviews. You probably have some loyal readers who might be a bit shy to post or they don't want to have an account on a certain site. Anyway, I have read several stories and was surprised by yours. You obviously put a lot of thought into the outcome of the story before you even started, and you've put some research into things such as the stones for Naria and Eria. Also, I enjoy your characterization. I know the characters came from the show but you have also made them your own. We are really seeing another side to Van in this chapter. Yay! Wow, I think I've written enough for now. Lol. I hope everything I said makes sense. In short, I love your story and I hope you get more reviews, you deserve them!
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