| "Seto's Wish Alternate World Conclusion" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Soulless Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll give you this, this story is awesome! I can't wait for new chapters...though I'm afraid that you'll make Kiba gay in the end >_
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 02:41 CST
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Good chapter. I hope Seto finds where he needs to be soon. I like this world with a good Noah around.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 04:24 CDT
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Good chapter. Poor Seto, to trust or not to trust, that's the question. I hope he can do what he needs to do.
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Reviewed By: luvly_rain On: October 20, 2006 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter keep writing!! gawd this story is good...
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 06:23 CDT
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Good chapter. I'm glad Seto could help Mokuba again. I hope he finds the world he's seeking soon.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 10:51 CDT
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Kaiba just keeps trying to help all the Mokubas in every world. He's a hero to Mokuba. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 02:06 CDT
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This is really good. Poor Mokuba seems to be the one that gets sick or hurt in every universe, although, it is Kaiba who usually ends up dead. He is very selfsacrificing for Mokuba.
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Title: 0_0
Reviewed By: luvly_rain On: September 27, 2006 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was so good. woulda been more fun if serenity did get kaiba to be her boy-toy...maybe u should make that happen somewhere?
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm glad Seto could help Mokuba. Joey was pretty funny.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 07:52 CDT
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Good chapter. I love that Mokuba is the strong one in this universe and Joey is a Kaiba and Serenity is a incestuous slut. Wonderful.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 09:15 CDT
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Poor CKaiba. I feel bad for him. I thought maybe Kaiba would try to help him. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 02:36 CDT
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Good chapter. So Seto is Kasey. Cute too bad Joey doesn't realise it. I guess that's why he started to visit.
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Title: great!!
Reviewed By: luvly_rain On: August 31, 2006 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story!! It's getting kinda mushy and all but its 1 of da best kaiba mokuba stories i read.^o^
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 13:10 CDT
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Good chapters. Sorry I didn't review all of them. I keep running out of time on the computer. Great fic. I hope Seto can do some good in this world. I wonder if Yugi and the others will believe that he is really Mokuba and not that he had a psychotic break with reality.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: RainLynx001 On: August 14, 2006 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really impressed with how well your story flowed, its probably the only fanfic i've read that doesnt have any plot bunnies. You portrayed Kaiba's character very well, the only gripe i have is the last chapter where he did it with Joey...I dont have a problem with yaoi, but given the storyline, it seems weird that he'd actually "do it" with a guy. That was probably the only part where he was out of character. 'Seto's wish' btw was awesome, i can't wait for your next update on this one!
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