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| "Cursed" Reviews/Comments [ 228 ] | | Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 › » ] | Title: KING
Reviewed By: KingSamuraiJack [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS THATS HOT!!
| Title: Bow down 2 Mistress of the LEMONS!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lemons, Lemons, I love Lemons! Fabulous Chapter! Absolutly Fabulous! Now that the sexual tension has been sated, I hope they can now focus on the real issues of the relationship. (Shin's little omission of the truth) I hope at the end of the two years all goes well. Like I said before I love your little lemons, they get steamier with every story. Pics, no prob. Just tell me where two send them! ^_~ ~B reading U!
| Reviewed By: KingSamuraiJack [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again your inner demons provide us the perfect chapter ... i like the way the trust between them grows every chapter, (as it should in other aspets of your life :) )anyway i digress amazing is the only word that would do this chapter justice!!
| Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 03:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, and you know how much I love my lemon. i really love how you put things, the way they are both feeling. it almost feels like they both have this vulnerability about the way they see things and are, and I really like that. Im thinking the big news is going to be fairly soon, should be interesting.
| Reviewed By: Vickey On: June 22, 2006 22:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cursed or caged, there is one thing that Sess excels at....the lemon. LOL. This was written so well. I'm trying not to be a regular reviewer, but...you're just so good.
| Title: mnesia1
Reviewed By: mnesai1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 11:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a good piece. I have only one request. Update, update, update...You've got us spellbound. We must know what happens next.
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 03:50 EDT
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oh, and I really hope that there isn't 'massive' trauma on day 365. I expect alittle trauma, but not massive. sigh, that would be horribl.......ok, I'm really going to bed now, and will reurn when I am back to normal :D
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 03:49 EDT
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whao, I just read susane's review, and culdn't help but wonder if she is right. is Takana the reicarnation of Rin?? (after all you did stress the fact that rin was no longer alive a lot....) and if so, did susane just go and ruin the surprise factor for you? lol, I think that would be....interesting. I'm not entirely sure if I'm fond of the idea, but I could live with it. but after all, and as I have said HUNDREDS of times, it's your story, and we are but your loyal followers, take us where you will. (lol, ok I've never said it quite like that b4, but if you read my review previous to this you will knwo that I am totaly hyped up right now, and loving every minute of it!!! heehee)lol, alright, I'm done my little rants now, and am actually off to bed, as it is 2 in the morning where I am (which is also a contributing factor to the adrenaline rush....), so g-night, and sweet dreams, for whenever it is you will be sleeping next, that is if you aren't already...... ;)
| Title: AWESOME! INCREDIBLE! GREEEEAAAAAT! :)
Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 03:43 EDT
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OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!!!!! I think this is by far my favorite chapter! I LOVE IT! ugh, filthy scumbags deserved way worse! lol, I figured right when I read it that Takana was gong to use her training to defend herself one of these days, and while this didn't turn out to be the time, I still suspect that such a time is in the near future, no? I loved every minute of this chapter, and I don't think that you could have done a much better job keeping sessh in character during the would be ambush! major props! :D I hope that when sesshomaru turns youkai again(assuming that that is what happens....) that he goes back and slowly and painfully dismembers and disembowls anyone who thinks lowly of Takana, or who tries anythig like that again. except that onumo guy. he should just suffer painfully for the rest of his miserable life. yikes. I am in a bit of a vindictive mood tonight, aren't I. lol, oh well. loved the chapter,a dn can't wait for more! P.S, I think that you did do a good job of establishing the trust/bond thing between sess and takana, I just think that the lemon scen needs a little tweaking. lol, sorry to repeat myself with that, I just wantd to let you know that you DID d a good job with the bonding etc, but that I hadn't lied to you before.......lol, oh I don't know. I'm all pumped up on adrenaline from reading this chapter that I don't even know what I am talking about!!
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 18:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read the last two chapters and they where EXCELLENT!!! Two more to go and my own little Takana and Marshall will be here. Keep your fingers crossed for me! Update soon, I'm SO LOVING this story!!!! But, what did I expect a great writer writes great stories!~B reading U!
| Reviewed By: KingSamuraiJack [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic , imo you are one of the best writers in here i have read through a few and your characters and story are superb , they have everything violence, sex and a little romance; im about to read your other stories, the only thing thats going to make me mad is when I reach the end !!! more more !!!
| Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 00:12 EDT
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With that, you're quite right! ^_^!
| Title: Susanne
Reviewed By: Susanne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 07:04 EDT
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This is just awsome. Normally, I'm not too fond of OC stories, but this one is splendid (although I have a nagging suspicion that Takana might be the reincarnation of Rin - after all, she did have a vision of Sesshoumaru's youkai form when she was near dying). I really like the way Sesshoumaru is kept in character even while he is changing. Compared to what he once was, he certainly is going soft, but I am sure that he doesn't seem so to other humans! Could you fit in a few paragraph of that into the story - I mean how others are viewing and perceiving him? But we already got it a bit through Takana, so it's not really necessary. I'm really looking forward to updates. I'm just afraid that we are heading towards massive trauma on day 365!
| Reviewed By: mnesai1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 03:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I, too; love Sesshomaru's decisiveness. I get particularly amused with his reasoning. If it makes sense to him; then there should be no argument. No need to confer with others. (Ided of democracy would certainly be lost on him ) Takana's his, he claimed her; that's it. This is certainly in sync with his character. However, as in the anime series, he will listen to reason. He refrained from killing Kohaku (perhaps a little because of Kagome's plea) remember?, but moreso because he deemed it foolish to go along with Naruku's plan. There's something rather childlike about Sess, as well. He's particularly curious about life. Ever evolving, ever learning, yet willing to step up when needed. Every girl's dream guy, come on. Except for the heartless killer instinct, he'd make a perfect mate. You know-- man of few words; listens; willing to defend your honor; etc, etc. I love it. He's certainly a dashing character that goes from gentleman to killer in less than 60 seconds. I had one of my friends laughing when I described his character; one minute, he' s accepting flowers from little Rin, indulging her ( for him, I suppose that's indulgence); and the next he's skinning an entire forest because the monk would not release his precious ward. (ep.162). YOU have captured that Sesshomaru in human form. This is such an intriguing piece. Excellent portrayals. I so look forward to future chapters. Keep up the fine work!!!
| Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 01:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh I wouldnt expect any less from Sesshoumaru to not have perfect aim. I really liked this chapter, dealing with her fears and then he making them go away with just a few words that i think she desperately needed to hear. I wonder whats going to happen when she does find out hes a youkai. hmmm...
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