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| "Cursed" Reviews/Comments [ 228 ] | | Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 › » ] | Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 20:20 EST
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Another slamdunk!!!!! It's a pleasure to read anything from this author!!!~ I'll B reading YOU!!!
| Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 17:20 EST
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*starts chanting in a sing-song voice* This-was-such-a-good-chapter...this-was-such-a-good-chapter!!! Yeah! I love it when authors update my favorite stories! Thanks for brightening up my day!!!!
| Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 16:58 EST
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Woooorddd... and I only wanted to cry, but didn't. I love the angsty. You should know this by what I write, silly person!
| Title: as always, excellent
Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 15:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew it. When I saw in my email that oneof my fav's had been updated I knew ithad to be yours. (I have about 50 favorite fanfictions, you'd think I'd be here 24/7 reading the updates to keep my inbox clean, but noooooo, as a matter of fact, other than yours I haven't had an updae in almost two weeks! *pouts and glaes evilly at neglectful authors*) anyway, about the chapter: lol! I don't know where to start! I jsut so thouroghly enjoyed that chapter! it was quite amusing/humourus without losing any of it's seriousness, I had a huge smile on my face the entire time I was reading it! lol poor Tomo. man is he in for some stressfull nights. I guess it's a good thing that they don't need their sleep like we do, cause I don't think he's going to be getting much of it. Also the little conversation between Takana and (oOops, just forgot her name...*runs and checks*) Yuti was great! Oh and what about that loki guy, huh? (no still can't put my finger on where I know that name from, but if I figure it out, I will let you know) I wonder how far away he was from sesh and Takana that Sesh couldn't hear or smell him? or is it more perhaps because sesshy is in love and is slipping a little? heehee, you mentioned my last review as long, but I think that this one most definatley tops it! Can't wait for more, I am definatley enjoying the developments with takana and sesshomaru and can't wait to see the oh-so-imminent demise of loki (and of course all who conspire against sesshy :D). Oh, and by the way, I am interested to see that you are not so above coerceing your loyal readers as I once thought you were. But I guess you wree under desperate circumstances.....;)
| Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 12:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate that us writers have to resort to threating the people who read our work and not review. Since I enjoy reading this story I thought I would make it known. You are doing great, giving me as a reader what I need, a little suspence and a lot of plot. I find it even more refreshing that not only have you created a new story line, at least to me knowledge, but you are keeping Sesshoumaru in character. I hope there will be some fighting and a little gore in it, but thats just me. I eagerly await the next chapter. Thank you for writing this great fic. It has inspired me to keep on keeping on. :-)
| Title: SnowFlakeAlchemist(offline)
Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 10:46 EST
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It is so good to finally get online and have not one but four chapters to read. Yea!!!!! And finally she id becoming herself again! I missed Takana. And for the pup... have you tried to crate train? It's usually the easiest way to potty train them.
| Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 10:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So it seems that a little "girl talk" was in order with Takana, lol. ...but maybe now she will fully realize the danger she is in...After all--it is safe to assume that there will be some Royal Intrigue and hurdles for Takana....and the Court is notoriously unfreindly, ne? Another great chapter!
| Reviewed By: emeraldoni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 03:08 EST
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NOOOO! Can I send my mom over? I'm too busy trying to potty train my kitties. Speaking of that, they are disgusting: cant even whipe their own as--rears correctly. I had to do it for them! Seriously, cling-ons are nasty. Animals are nasty. Damn. And I still love them. Theres a big 'S' on my forehead isnt there? S for SUCKER. Ah well. Great chapter, by the way, and I cant wait for more. Very exciting! And theyre slowly getting longer too! Yay! I like Yuti, she doesnt seem half bad. Though, of course, Takana is still my favorite. Eya! Update soon, please! And good luck with the puppy. I feel your pain (I've had to do puppies, and now kitties. Yuck!) ~emeraldoni
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 19:18 EST
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lol, no worries, I don't think that that chapter was so much of a rehash that it ceased to be intersting or whatnot, I think it was fine that you added it and I don't think it was unnecisary. hmmm.. loki? loki? WHERE do I know that name from? oooh I see we are in for a bit of bloodshed? tsk, it's really a shame that people(or youkai) are so foolish as to mess with Seshomaru and think that they could actually beat him. sigh, I guess they just won't ever learn. oooh, now how about his swords? does he ever get them back? I kind of think that he would, but you never know. But what if he does get them back but first they fall into the wrong hands *gasp* dun dun dun. lol anyway, in my last reveiw I just said what I said about not having dropped off the face of the earth because I was feeling a little bad for no having reviewed for awhile, though I had been reading, not because I felt like you would think ill of me or anything, but becaues I enjoy revewing your stories and reading your respnses to my reveiews :). so thats all. but I totally know what you mean, about authors threatening their readers, it can be just the tiniest bt annoying. I mean come one, stop trying to coerce their readers into writing reveiws. I mean I understand that it can be dissapointing when you write a story and no one reveiws, but still, that really doesn't give you the right to threaten the readers that are reading without reviewing. *eyes soapbox* but anyway, like I said, I really didn't think that you are the type to hold it against me for not reviewing, I was saying it simply because I enjoy reveiwing your stories and reading your responses. can't wait for more, and I think you already have it at least planned out, if not written, so I am expecting that it won't be to long until you update ;)
| Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 14:57 EST
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Nooo, I want to cry T_T!!! Not fair! Btw, I'll draw you some fanart, if you'd like :3. *squee* Just tell me what you'd prefer!
| Title: a.k.a: Sola
Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 00:21 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this chapter. You captured the feeling of being on a pedistal and inadequacy that accompanies it--without flaw. Takana, I felt, was a bit harsh on Sesshoumaru...but then again, perhaps they should learn to communicate better to avoid such misunderstandings, ne? Love it, looking forward to another chapter!
| Reviewed By: emeraldoni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 20:22 EST
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That's play. I understand, but I still see some hope for them in the future. At least she still loves him, right? I dont know what you have planned, good ending or bad, but at the moment I hold hope for the two of them, which I keep catching small gleanings of. I am so excited by how much you've been updating though! This is amazing! Absolutely amazing! Thank you so much! ~emeraldoni
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 18:40 EST
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Another great job as usual!~B reading U!
| Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 23:43 EST
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Wow...another chapter so soon! Outstanding drama between the duo. When is she going to tell him about the baby? I know you won't tell me, but I still have to ask. =)
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 20:00 EST
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Great chapters they were worth the long, long, long wait! It was absolutly fabulous; I loved it! I'm looking forward to the next exciting update! I feel so sorry for Sess and Takana; I hope she can forgive him. I read the latest chapter of 'Red Eye' it was the bomb! I just though I should let you know! P.S. My little one are doing well! And the twins are excellent! On 11-14 they will be 4 months old! Thomas is a little daredevil! I tries to scoot all over our bed! And little Takana or Taki as everyone has taken to calling her is just beautiful! She talks all the time (or so she thinks)! They are even starting to reconize their own names! Tommy turns when he hears his name, but sometime he doesn't turn to the right person -__-. Taki looks when you call her then she goes about her business! She is just too grown up for me *__*! I have also been working on my own Sesshomaru story. I have made Inuyasha a female though. My 10, 6, & 4 year olds say I did it wrong and that Inuyasha is a boy, but I'm not very good with yoai stories. Plus, Inuyasha kindof looks like a girl! I hope to have it up soon, I get writers block and my kids own me at times! Anyway, thanks for the update It's awesome!!!!!!~ B reading U!
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