Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 04:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty intersting, but the fic stops before it really gets any where so it's hard to comment. The start is a bit shakey, Ranma turning into a were-cat for almost no reason? No magic spell gone wrong, no posion or potions. The simple stress of a bullet wound and emotional stress of betrayl hardly make a convicing reason for a full body trasformation. Deep Neko-ken mind set sure, physical changes not really. Over all it's a good idea I hope others pick this up, or you continue it eventualy. I think I can honestly say this is the first fic I've read to even hint Brit was a virgin. In fact the digger sisters always seem to be the biggest sluts in fan fiction=p
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