| "Tails Gets Twisted" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Sidetracked
Reviewed By: TheFellow3J [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Life keeps getting me sidetracked... The story's not dead; I'm just a bit lazy with it. Soon enough, chapter 8 should be up.
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Reviewed By: shadow crazed 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 22:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your rewrite turned out well; I can't wait until your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: HolyNightmare [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess Tails being agressive but since he's a fox/Kitsune its kind in is nature do be dominant,beside i would also say his hormones have somewhat taken control of him or at least are influencing him greatly at doing dirty things.
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Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 09:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, that seems like a much better idea, but do you mean a girl who wants to be dominated or someone a bit villainous? either way its better than doing it to Tikal, she really is too innocent to try that sort of shit.
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Title: Ideas
Reviewed By: TheFellow3J [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Actually, I though about something that's coming up in the story, and I got a better idea about this chapter. I'm going to rewrite this one and leave the BDSM for a chick that actually NEEDS it. So , when Tails gets pissed off, be ready.
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Title: About Chapter 6...
Reviewed By: TheFellow3J [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah; Tails might have jumped the gun on this one, even if Tikal was trying to escape. Honestly, this'll be one of the worst chapters. If I had to rate this chapter, well... you see what I put. Don't worry... Tails knows what he's doing. Trust me.
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Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This review is not a flame, or not intended to be one anyway: tell me, do you have a bit of a domination fetish? it just seems that you like Tails to completely dominate these girls. i didnt really mind Amy and Mina (cos they eventually got Sonic and Tails was just having fun) but i think with Tikal hes turned into a bastard (although the title does kinda suggest it). really too far gone from the original character i think, its gone beyond mischief. i will still read but i have to say im not exactly in love with this fic anymore.
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Title: Crysrtal
Reviewed By: Kiyu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 11:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Howd the Crystal get,in him again?
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Title: Likesalot
Reviewed By: Kiyu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kick ass fic dude! Gimme More! Likes alot, Kiyu
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Title: Tails and the Power
Reviewed By: TheFellow3J [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
That's just how powerful that emerald inside of Tails is. (Of course, this emerald is impossibly rare i.e. non-existent in the real stories, but...)
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Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fictiob my single problem is i don't understand some of the things done, like invisibilty. i never saw the comics so thats probably why.
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Reviewed By: jaredh72 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been great so far. I love it and can't wait for the rest! Keep it coming and don't end it anytime soon!
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Title: I know!
Reviewed By: TheFellow3J [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 14:05 CST
Comment/Review:
See... I'm in my last year of college, so the story's been slow. I think I'll put a chapter out over the next 10 days or so.
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: HolyNightmare [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well,i never actually imagined Tails would do that,but if someone had that power i doubt they would not use it to get womens,i don't really know where the plot is going but continue,sad no one review.
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