| "Time Is The Enemy of Mortals" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must say EXCELLENT job, on MM too!!! Was wondering when you'll be posting it here! It's so nice to read it again!!! Was thinking... beyond all his Youkai-coldness-thing, should be difficult to see the humans you care for, grow older and die. We always tend to see things from ower human side, but maybe all this... crap about "weak creatures" it's their selfdefense way of avoiding suffering. You know, to get close to people, laugh and enjoy and share with beings that will die shortly after. For them, it's too short time to us, a life-time. They look the same, don't change... how is it for them? To be able to watch the seasons change through centuries, to not get close to a human being because you know that in a blink of an eye they'll be not more... Sad, lonely, cold... Okay, Excellent job as usual. Thank you ::bows deeply: thank you!!
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Title: Together Forever is snot cry-worthy.
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your introspection on the enigma that is Sesshoumaru is awesome! The end had me weepy. It was like someone pushed PAUSE for 10 seconds and when they pushed the button again, I still couldn't speak. I liked the Rin/Kohaku pairing a lot and the silent safeguarding of Sessy a lot. This is truly a nice piece, a great read, and a new addition to my FAVORITE section! Keep up the good work!
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was simply Beautiful...
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Title: WHY?
Reviewed By: esmeralda21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been putting off this story because I knew it would make me cry and guess what it did! anyway, i still love it! even the title made me feel sentimental! love your work!
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Title: (Sniffle, Sniffle)
Reviewed By: Yukiinu On: December 18, 2006 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Grabs tissue and blows nose loudly) That was so sweet. I love how you always give the characters a certain realness to them. I'll bet Sesshoumaru would be that stubborn that he'd never admit his feelings of love to a human, (I guess it runs in the family) but damn would I love to smack him silly for it!(Not that I'd even be able to reach him.) Well it was a terrific fic! Even if it was short it still gave me cutesy little butterflies in my tummy! I like these HTML tag thingys, they're Fun! (Begins to play with one.)
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Title: Aww! (sniffle)
Reviewed By: Kichi(Not logged in even tho I did 2 minutes ago) On: July 16, 2006 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Oh! Sessho Maru is sooo STUPID!!! and racist! hehehe.. He should have just been with Rin AND the other chick, him and his "Honor" I'm glad we Americans have virtually none whatsoever. I mean honestly, I was never taught about honor I only learned about it probably watching anime- pretty pathetic. Oh well enough babbling- good little shorty fic
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Reviewed By: zenia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww that was so sad... I am a little teary. T^T
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Title: KONNICHI HA
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 05:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH It was lovey ^^ Sorry I couldn't review logged in, damn computer. Anyway awsome job a little sad but still awsome
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Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 On: June 01, 2006 00:16 CDT
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aparently puttting somthing in the > < shapes causes it to not show up, *Miroku's Voice*: Will you bear my children (fixed)
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Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 On: June 01, 2006 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was short and good (both versions) I like the longer version a bit more, simply because it provides more details, and makes it a bit easier to understand. Either way, I am amazed at your ability to create such a loving story, but also bringing a tear to my eye with the enevitable, and tragic, yet beautifully written ending. : Will you bear my children?
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Both are really good. One, short and sweet, the other, way more detailed. But both equally good. Sad, but good.
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Title: BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my!!!!! I have no words to describe the feeling!!!!! It's overwhelming... it's romantic... it's tragic... it's terribly sad... and -at the same time- the situation is not so unbelievable. I do imagine Rin marrying no-one and Sesshomaru marrying and not mating to produce an heir. Very sweet and tragic. Congratulations!!! As always you did a great job!!! Mage Delbene
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Title: So sad, but oh so sweet!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A classic! B reading U!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: May 30, 2006 15:43 CDT
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okay, i may say inuyasha is a baka, but sesshy brings new meaning to it in this little drabble. but i can totally see him being that way. his hatred for hanyous runs deep and so much of it comes from feeling betrayed by his father. that's a lot of issues to work through for someone who can live thousands of years. rin's life would have seemed so short to work through it all.but at least he always held her in his heart. sesshy was bound by his past and his duties. lovely.
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great little chapter, and I could easily see this one chapter becoming a multy chapter story, or remaining as a stand alone chapter.
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