| "Dragonball MSN" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: animelover09 On: June 21, 2006 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz update soon! ITS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUNNY!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: dbz_fangirl_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol I loved that. U should really write more chapter lol
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Title: WWWWOOOOOT!!!! ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!!
Reviewed By: DPFan4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LORD OF SPANDEX!!??? SHORT AND SWEET!!?? VEGETABLE BOY!!??? POUTY PRINCE PETITE!!??? AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! OMG MY STOMACH HURTS FROM THIS LAUGHTER *dies* ... *ghost rises* I am the ghost of DPFan4Ever and I shall do your bidding oh great and honerable writer, Amid_Much_Hysteria. LMAO ChiChi wants a parrot XD... Oh and is that dude who assaulted Vegeta, Master Roshi? 'Cause the screen name and personality sound like him ^_^
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Title: ROFL LMAO LOL!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD OMG!!! That was hilarious!! Chap 3 is great!!! Vegetable boy...XD You're killing me!!! Lord of spandex LOL!! And the part where Vegeta was 'assaulted' was also my fave!! This is the funniest fic EVER! ROFL *Dies from laughing and lack of breath*
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Reviewed By: JCA_Saiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^.6 of course I"m sticking with you keep writing stuff like this and I shall always stick with you!!! Anyway I toatally know what you are talking bout with the low voices!!! They're sooooo hott! Anyway I love the screenname suggestions there awesome!!!! I think he should go with 'Lord of Spandex'. But one out of them all. And was the other dude Roshi? Cuase his screenname totally sounds like it! Anyway keep 'em coming and it's cool about the late update!
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Reviewed By: SuperSanne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 15:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
o_0 Master Roshi! Poor vegeta! ROFL!!!
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: jarulesafag [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome! Awesome idea putting DBZ and MSN together lol. The end of ch2 was funny Lol.
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Reviewed By: Tixi On: June 06, 2006 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good idea, do write more chapters!
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Reviewed By: SuperSanne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 08:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lol! Yamcha's screenname in the second chapter!
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Reviewed By: JCA_Saiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh Again two thumbs up on the second chapter!! I'm lovin' it. And yes I love Vegeta and I totally understand what you are saying with that people don't stop to think about how much he's gone through in his life! Oh well people just don't get it and if they don't want to take the time to look at him then they don't deserve to know ^.6 And yeah he's my favorite character. Him and Goten...don't know why I like Goten but hey he's cool. Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! PLEASE GET IT OUT SOON!!!!!! Or I shall continue to beg. *begs on knees* lol j/k j/k Anyway Much Luv!
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Title: Amid_Much_Hysteria = Genius
Reviewed By: DPFan4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Chapter 2 made me laugh even HARDER!! I see Krillen got a new screen name, I LOVE YAMCHA'S SCREEN NAME!!! ROFLMFAO!!! Krillen got SO pissed off ^_^ and the entire time Goku's cooking??? GENIUS!!! Pure Dragonball Z GENIUS!! I must bow down before you, for I am the many who are not worthy *bows down* I'm not worthy *bows again* I'm not worthy
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Reviewed By: JCA_Saiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG I'm rolflmao!!!! That was soo flipp' hilarious!!!!! I love the screennames and usually I get mad when people are dissin' Vegeta but I loved it. PLus the very ending with Piccy and Goku that was awesome "What's Adultry?" Omg I think I busted a lung. I hope you write/post more! Oh and btw I've been kicked off of ff.net too I feel your pain!!!
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Title: ROFL
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL that was funny!! I hope you update soon! Goku is so dumb 'whats adultery?' Vegeta and Krillen were so funny! I was laughing so hard I couldnt breath anymore!!! You just made my day...LOL Update! ^________^
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Title: ROFL
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL that was funny!! I hope you update soon! Goku is so dumb 'whats adultery?' Vegeta and Krillen were so funny! I was laughing so hard I couldnt breath anymore!!! You just made my day...LOL Update! ^________^
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Title: Just thought i'd check this fanfic out...
Reviewed By: DPFan4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING FOR 10 MINUTES!!! OMG THIS IS PURE GENIUS!!! Whoa my heads dizzy from laughing 0_o... LOLz nayways THIS IS AWESOME!!! LMAO "I think you'd make a great mamma" ^_^!!!!!! Great work!!!
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