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Title: pairings
Reviewed By: chibi_naru-chan On: July 11, 2006 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!! Write more! Write more! Ohhhhh I think you should write a SasuNaru or a threesome. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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Title: SasuNaru?
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a very good job on your first lemon! I really like the Naruto hanyou idea as well. I'm not sure where the yaoi will be coming or where this story is going exactly (which is a good thing, for sure!), but I'm very eager to find out. I know that you've been having problems reading your reviews, so I'll send this to your e-mail as well. Much Love, Peach.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: IgnorantBoy On: June 21, 2006 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I love the story, and plot! And did i mention the plot? Anywho... i don't like the idea of a Kiba/Naru fic, but hey its your fic, u write, what am i to say? If its going to be yoai, my only preference is naru/sasuke. But istill love this fic! ~They say ignorance is bliss, heh, they don't know the half of it." ~Ignorant Boy
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Reviewed By: zannen On: June 21, 2006 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like your story. please continue it. i'm anxious to find out who the spy is...it can't be someone obvious...or can it?
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Reviewed By: NNCS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so Far!
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Reviewed By: NNCS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so Far!
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Title: naruto and sasuke
Reviewed By: babii_ang3ls On: June 20, 2006 08:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey! make it sasuke and naruto! there cute together! kiba and naruto dont make a good match!
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Reviewed By: Catsy1021 On: June 17, 2006 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving this story. I hope you make it a full treesome cause i never read a story with all three of them together. Hope you update soon.
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Title: Rei
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this on AFF.Net to and truthfully I can't wait for more!
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Title: Keep it coming
Reviewed By: Zendura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice start, keep it going. lol funny thought !!!!!!!!!!akamaru/yuki!!!!!!!!!! lol yeah like i said silly thought. this story looks like it could be my 3rd favorite ("Training for the Job" is my 1st and "Stay with me" my 2nd)
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Title: threesome
Reviewed By: Z On: June 11, 2006 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story, especially the narrative in explaining naruto's background. Please keep up the good work. And if it wasn't obvious from my titile i am voting on the threesome...
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: June 10, 2006 15:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter its really good and i think that the couple should be Kiba/Naruto/Sasuke because i think that it would be really cute well anyways update it really soon thanks tootles.
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 13:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it! Do Kiba/Naruto as a pairing! I never seen a Kiba/Naruto pairing here on mediaminer. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: NekoKieran On: June 03, 2006 01:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm...well, here's my constructive criticism. For starters, you have an excellent concept on your hands. While this kind of plot and theme have been done to death, you've still managed to throw some things in there that are totally original, and that's definitely something to be proud of. All of this creativity, however, to put it bluntly, is just marred to death and plagued by spelling errors and grammar mistakes, which take away a lot from the story. If there's one thing I've noticed on this website, it's that a lot of writers have this problem, yet I rarely comment on it, since most of those stories also aren't really worth the effort of trying to help. But you are, since you seem to show a lot of potential. My suggestion is to run it through a spellchecker first, and then have someone else beta it or at least proofread it for grammar and syntax errors. That really, honestly would improve the story tenfold, as it would make it much easier to read and comprehend, and would certainly be more entertaining for your audience. Let me reiterate that my intentions are only to improve the story and let it live out to its true potential, so please take this review for what it is and consider the suggestions I made.
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Reviewed By: fLcL_FFx_lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!! i love it !! i love it!! write more
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