| "Sovereign Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bloodcherry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Numbess?!?! NOOOO! XD Excuse my hyperness... I can't help it! Hahahahaha! So, anyway your story is great so far! This is the first Kagome/Koenma I've read that I like! I haven't read a lot of those, but if you have a great suggestion... I'm in! XD As long as it is well written.... Heh. I hope you can update soon!! Ja ne, Bloodcherry P.s. I just wanted to try if the color worked! XD
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: August 16, 2006 04:58 CDT
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>< IM BACK! yes! I just read your two chapters and im feeling very pleased now ^^ keep up the story
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: July 10, 2006 03:55 CDT
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ahhh and so everthing is back on track. I wonder what kazuma's training is....
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Reviewed By: GraveRose On: July 06, 2006 22:53 CDT
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You have a nice story. Hope you update soon! : )
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: July 04, 2006 05:56 CDT
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hmmm this whole 'completing' thing adds to the twist ne?
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Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: June 21, 2006 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So she's been watching over them for a long time, ne? Hm...I wonder is Koenma jealous? I don't see Kagome really forgiving him easily after what he did (or rather, didn't do) I mean she's loyal, extremely to her friends and loved ones and would never accept someone who 'loves' someone to do nothing when that person is in danger...What could he want to talk about and what about Kurama? Hm...Anyway, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Anonymouso On: June 21, 2006 02:28 CDT
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What does Koenma have to say to Koenma? Wonder how many will be going against Enma (Yama)?
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Reviewed By: qarry [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Its story line is so original. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I am at lost for words, your story is very good. Keep up the good work, hope you UPDATE ASAP. PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE... Because if you don't I'm going to cry. Good luck. Cya :^)
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Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: June 14, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did she just smile at Kurama? Why was Kurama looking at her? Why did Koenma say those things? After all is it not he who turned his back (so to speak) on her first? Anyway, I'm intrigued, keep up the good work! can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: June 14, 2006 21:28 CDT
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Does Sota, Shippo, Koga, and Sesshomaru know about Kagome and Koenma and what happened? What will happen when they see Koenma? Do they blame Koenma for what almost happened to Kagome? Are they protective of Kagome, even more so now then before? Does Enma (Yama) know or have any clue on what's going on or what's going to happen? Will Hiei be suspecious of Kagome, especially since she seems to know his little secret? Please update ASAP. This is great.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: June 14, 2006 03:08 CDT
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Who is it, who is it? This will surprise everyone when they see that the person they thought was old isn't as old as they thought. Does King Enma (Yama) have anyone that he can truelly trust? How many beings want him thrown out? How many beings are willing to help Koenma? What is Kagome up to? This could have been their destiny from the start. Please update ASAP Great job.
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Reviewed By: reviewerer On: June 13, 2006 20:42 CDT
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: June 13, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting...So is the 'old woman' *cough, cough* young girl, Kagome? Will she return with Yusuke to see Koenma? Or will Yusuke report back to the temple to report what happened and the girl? Will anyone be able to learn it? (It being the thing that Yusuke was going to attempt to learn from her) And how does she change her apperance? I guess she's very powerful and must've learned a lot over time...And who are the 'higher beings' that control the Gaia objects? Anyway, Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter!
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Title: So Cuute
Reviewed By: Raizen (NLI) On: June 12, 2006 23:27 CDT
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SOOO Cute! Please update i really think Kagome should be wit Koenma, She is Kagome! She should be able forgive him!
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