| "Straight Guy Sex?" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: narinari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 20:40 CST
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Omc you have to wirte another one I just read this twice in a row it's so good!
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Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: December 15, 2006 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read your story from beginning to end and I enjoyed the hell out of it. Although reluctant at first, they eventually screw (sorry, couldn't resist!) up the courage to confront themselves first about their feelings and eventually confess to each other. Both have great parents, which may have contributed to them being decent guys themselves. I like how Kellen really got addicted to sex with Zach, but even better when he realized he was happy just being together with him. You've created some memorable characters and I'd love to see them later in life, too. Unless you both manage to get in the same college, it's really tough when high school graduation means a deadline for the relationship, too. It's so hard to make the transition, and many fail. You've pulled a lot of different elements together in your story, and I thank you for the pleasure of reading it! I'll be looking out for your name as author on future stories. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Sandy_rox On: December 09, 2006 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an awsome writer! You should definately continue this story!
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Reviewed By: Shadows67 On: November 18, 2006 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should SO do another story. I love your work!
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Title: You're amazing!
Reviewed By: Biggest anime fan 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the first chapter a little after it came out, and all I can say about that is that I'm sorry I didn't review immidiately. I loved it SO much! I also thought it was a one-shot. But now I was checking how you've been doing after my months-long absence and i'm seeing MANY! I LOVE YOU! I just know I'm gonna love this (I haven't read the rest yet. I just had to share my joy over them first.) Thank you so much. Keep up the great work (like I need to tell you!)
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Title: Please Continue The Story !!!
Reviewed By: Marvelous Things On: November 04, 2006 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is very, VERY hard to find an original yaoi fanfic that is both interesting and well written. Espically since there are so many people [idiots] against pro-homosexual relationships. I was looking forward to seeing how Kellen and Zack deal with discrimination at school or even better, more sex (YAY FOR YAOI !!). If not, could you at least make a sequel? Thanks for listening (and writing ^^).
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 19:11 CST
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beautifully done ol chap!! can't wait to see if you'll write more.
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Reviewed By: vixie_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 11:13 CST
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Yay!!! Happy! Kellen's mom rox! Awesome fic! Loved it whole lots!
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 07:11 CST
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::snifflers:: I'm so happy everything worked out. I really love Zach and Kellen and I like the picture of their happily ever after!
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Reviewed By: Ryua [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, so so nice! I absolutely adored this. And it happens at a time when I've been forced out of the closet myself, it offers a little bit of hope, you know? Beautiful writing, as always.
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Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 19:00 CST
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Nooooo - it's over! I have enjoyed looking forward to this story every week :( so so sad to see it's ended but what a nice realistic ending :) I liked it I'm surprised by the lets go public but Kellen wasn't one to pull punches! ... gosh I hope you do another story soon I really have enjoyed your original fiction and your gravi fiction :)
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 18:57 CST
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Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooo! It's ooover! Can you write another original?Like this one? It's so good- I loved the ending. I want a mum like Kellen's. Please write another boy x boy original!
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: Silver Talons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! that was the best fic I've read in forever! Thank you so much *tears streaming* it was so awesome!
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Reviewed By: vixie_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 11:25 CST
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Wicked sad, yeah? I love it Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 06:28 CDT
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I liked seeing Kellen in some pain. I hope Zach hooks up with another guy just to see Kellen's reaction. I like how both his mum and his best friend were so understanding. His mum is so blunt. Hilarious.
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