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| "Unfulfilled Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: Definite Creativity
Reviewed By: WolfishSerenity On: June 30, 2006 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I must ask... are you working with the Kingdom Hearts crew, or did you bribe them for storyline info? Heh, kidding, of course. Seriously though, this goes extremely well with the trailer, and I have to say, I'd love it if they'd use this for the story for the new game. The way you've written it definitely draws the reader in, and the way you came up with the ideas for what the Chasers were (ever thought of looking Chaser up in the dictionary? I've heard that it's possible the Chasers are the misunderstood creators of the Keyblades. ;3). Though that's just a rumor anyways. Though possible. In any case, this story has really drawn me in. I'd love to read more. The characters are definitely good in depth and I love their personalities. You add just the right touch of light laughter to the story at all the perfect moments. Continue writing, and I'll DEFINITELY continue reading. Good luck in all that you do! And if anything, I say you should get this published under a fanfiction publicist...person...oh, I forget what they're called. Excuse me for that. In any case. Good work!
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Reviewed By: Mordrid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it you maust add the other chapters soon! Please update I'm dying over here!
| Reviewed By: Yami396 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 16:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
EERRRKK! Can a person have a review!
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