| "Unfulfilled Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Uniasus(lazy) On: March 17, 2007 15:50 CDT
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AHH! Xenos! TT.TT I rather enjoyed the conversations between the bickering Xenos and Winter. They're so spunky^-^
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Title: FFRG Review Chap. 1
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 12:06 CST
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This is a very well written fic. While I can't tell if Sora is OOC (since this is based on a game, there is no real way to be OOC with him, since I've seen people play it that are real jerks to everyone) I can say that you effectively created several sold characters. You have created a very firm and believable relationship between your three characters, without instilling any Mary-Sue/Gary Stuness. Excellent job, please keep submitting to FFRG.
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 05:42 CST
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I want to thank you for adding more, its nice to Sora didn't completly go poof, at least, not yet.
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Reviewed By: Uniasus (not loged in) On: January 29, 2007 18:36 CST
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Gore wise, your fine. I've seen worse. Just, don't make it too Sawish. Than again, I am an older teen. A 15 year old might feel different. Sorry for killing of peeps? Not really. Have you ever read Anne of Green Gables? A girl in thier always kills her charaters because she can't think of what to do with them, or they begin to bore her. I hope you're not one of those. If you were, I might do a little more than o.O
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Title: Nice fic
Reviewed By: kngdmhrts15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic plz update soon i am addicted and if you dont update soon i will hunt you down and make you update!!
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 21:24 CST
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Oooo, very nice! I must say Winter has grown on me.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: kngdmhrts16 On: August 10, 2006 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was long and i liked it i thought i would hate is fic but it was pretty cool so far now you just need to finish it and nice going thinking up that poem code thing
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: WolfishSerenity On: July 28, 2006 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant idea with the poem. I sat there for a while trying to figure out what it was supposed to mean before I read on, and after Xenos went on like that... xD I had no clue he'd be bright enough to figure that thing out. Still, that was a cool way to use poetry as a secret code-type thingy. I'll have to remember to do that some time. xD Keep writing!!
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Title: Darklord
Reviewed By: Nihulus On: July 27, 2006 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again Yami you have managed to screw up reality by bending the laws of writing.
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Title: Commander of the Dreadnought
Reviewed By: Melkor On: July 06, 2006 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Once again you have rewritten the laws of writing! Oh yeah, also chaser #269.5 would like to file a complaint, something about being killed and hacked to pieces after death, well just ignore him and update. OR ELSE!
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Title: OoO! AHHH
Reviewed By: ryoblackheart ~ to lazy to sign in anyway On: July 04, 2006 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! I LOVE THIS! well i don't have both games so mine sucks compared to you. I only the gba one....well my story ish wierder so I LOVE YOUR FANFIC! GOD IT FREAK'N BEATS MINE TO THE DUST! I ENVY UUUUU!!!! AND W/E YOU DO DON'T LISTEN TO THE FREAK'N FLAMERS! YOU HEAR THAT FLAMERS! THIS IS HIGH QUALITY STUFF HERE! so....yeah.... OH LOOK A COOKIE!
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Title: Can't think of one
Reviewed By: Random-anom. person On: July 01, 2006 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story and your writing style is so unique, in a good way. LOL. This is one of the best stories that I have ever read and you could become published if you wished to be. Update soon.
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Title: Definite Creativity
Reviewed By: WolfishSerenity On: June 30, 2006 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I must ask... are you working with the Kingdom Hearts crew, or did you bribe them for storyline info? Heh, kidding, of course. Seriously though, this goes extremely well with the trailer, and I have to say, I'd love it if they'd use this for the story for the new game. The way you've written it definitely draws the reader in, and the way you came up with the ideas for what the Chasers were (ever thought of looking Chaser up in the dictionary? I've heard that it's possible the Chasers are the misunderstood creators of the Keyblades. ;3). Though that's just a rumor anyways. Though possible. In any case, this story has really drawn me in. I'd love to read more. The characters are definitely good in depth and I love their personalities. You add just the right touch of light laughter to the story at all the perfect moments. Continue writing, and I'll DEFINITELY continue reading. Good luck in all that you do! And if anything, I say you should get this published under a fanfiction publicist...person...oh, I forget what they're called. Excuse me for that. In any case. Good work!
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Title: Dreadnought Commmander
Reviewed By: Mordrid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it you maust add the other chapters soon! Please update I'm dying over here!
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Reviewed By: Yami396 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 16:01 CDT
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EERRRKK! Can a person have a review!
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