| "A Betting Crowd" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Carpathian Rose On: March 25, 2011 15:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. WOW, FUCKING WOW! I almost didn't read this because it was only two chapters but when I started reading it...I LOVED IT! It was perfect! I loved how you kept them both in character but when they realized the depth of their feelings for each other, it still seemed like them. The forplay and sex scenes were HOT. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Kittel_kat On: November 20, 2007 11:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful and throughoutly enjoyable fanfic. :D I simply adore this, and it is absolutely one of the best Riza-Roy fics out there. :D Take pride in your work, because I've read a lot of them, and this is on my top 5. ;) I think I found a spelling-error (or rather it looks like you wanted to write something, then deleted it, rewrote it but some of the original sentence remained) or two in it, hence only 9 in Spelling & Gramma, because when I say 10, I mean bloody 10, nothing short of perfect. ;) Look it through some times, correct those and it'll be an all 10'er. ;)
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Reviewed By: Aquaela On: July 24, 2006 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very neat style of writing. Impressive. Story was great.
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Title: Oh My GOSH
Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I abosoluetly LOVE you story. You're so real, and you write things how it actually would be in life, not the fangirl lovey dovey style. I REALLY hope you update, soon!
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: SkyMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 20:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was most definitely one of the better FMA stories I've read here on Mediaminer. Excellent work.
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Title: LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: Lady_Suzuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 19:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! that was so sweet! i loved it! but OMG!! the ending could have made me cry!!! *tear* roy is being an idiot! omg he needs to realize that he cannot do that to riza!! OMG!! UPDATE!!
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Title: I’m speechless
Reviewed By: loyalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me just say one thing "OMG!! THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST ROYAI STORIES I'VE EVER READ!!!" Please excuse my yelling, I just love your story that much. . XD Lol Your story is fantastic. Update soon, please. Oh, sorry I couldn't login in but this *cough* stupid site wouldn't *cough* let me sign in on this page.
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Title: I love your Fic!
Reviewed By: RoyxRizaxBH On: June 07, 2006 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the plot! This is really really good! Please update soon. ^^ Your story is truly wonderful. You wrote it well and I love your style of writing.
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