| "Do I Loathe Thee?" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 20:59 CDT
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WELL ok, i don't know what to do for suggestions but complimenting is always good. So... yeah, I like how you brought in Miroku, it was cool.
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster being a lazy ass On: July 11, 2006 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the last chapter, to cute!!! *steals the cute acting shippo and wonders what inuyasha ish thinkin* shippo and inuyasha make the show i think... well at least Inuyasha XD lol, he ish so awesome, i wish there was a guy like him in real life XD'*drools like in smilely thing* lol, im so wierd like that after reading this story and yanna_enoah's Complexities of Fate . hehe >:D*starts an evil plot to find a way to take characters out of the tv* mwuahahahahahahaha... *cough* ok im done with my evil deads today :D lol, great story you have to keep writing its just to good, as well as cute!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 00:59 CDT
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oh Shippo.... ^_^ so cute. Not as cute as Inuyasha though... Inu will always be my favorite. ^_^ Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 18:56 CDT
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Love it!!! Did you know that miroku comes into the group before Sango?? Oh well doesn't really matter.Hey Check out my story that I created, i think it's pretty good.It's called Yoho , Yoho A Pirate's Life for Me. It's about Inuyasha.Just check it out and tell me what you think ok.To get to the story click on my name and go to fanfictions and it should be there. I have 3 chapter s for it so far, and all three are longer than anything I've ever writtenm.GO ME!!! Ahem. Love your story, please check out mine.
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Reviewed By: star555555528(nsi) On: June 22, 2006 12:41 CDT
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Happy birthday!!! lol i cnt review on the actual date soon heres ur review. im totally hooked on ur story it has a great plot. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 21:35 CDT
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I HATE INU/SESSH FICS THAT IS SERIOUSLY VILE AND DISGUSTING IT MAKES ME WANNA BARF WHEN I READ A SUMMARY OF A STORY AND IT SAYS INU/SESSH PAIRING.... LIKE EW!!!!!!! HOW THE HELL CAN YOU STOMACHE THAT , LIKE SERIOUSLY SESH AND INU HATE EACHOTHER NO FUCKING WAY WOULD THEY EVER LIKE EACH OTHER SEXUALLY AND NO FUCKING WAY ARE THEY GAY!!!!! DOESN'T ANYONE ELSE OTHER THAN ME SEE THAT KAGOME AND INUYASHA BELONG TOGETHER AND THAT KIKYO OR WHOEVER THE HELL ELSE DON'T? KAGOME IS A SENSITIVE CARING GIRL WHO LOVES INUYASHA , HE WAS A GRUFF HANYOU BECUASE HE WAS TREATED BADLY AS A CHILD , SHE CHANGED THAT, THEY SHOULD LOE EACH OTHER IN THE SERIES BUT OF COURSE THEY DON'T, OBVIOUSLY RUMIKO TAKAHASHI HAS OTHER PLANS FOR THEM...ANYWAYS THATS MY RANT , LOVE THE STORY UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528(nsi) On: June 13, 2006 11:42 CDT
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great!!! lol ok well update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 06:56 CDT
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I would be happy too if I got Inuyyasha for my birthday.^_^
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 20:25 CDT
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KK I love long chapters but your normal sized chapters are fine, I can't wait for your next chapter, take as long as you need.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 08:20 CDT
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I think the flow of things in your story is just fine.I love it, so please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: elphaba On: June 09, 2006 23:19 CDT
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Awesome story i cant wait 2 see what happens next. yeah it flows together perfectly.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 21:56 CDT
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^_^ thank you for the oh so subtle comment on my opinion.... clears throat.....Sango's village was destroyed by naraku( that much you should know) Sango, Kohaku, Her father, and some other demon slayers were called away on a 'mission' to a mansion to help rid them of a demon.The Kingy guy of the mansion was actually a demon working for naraku.It was some kind of spider demon cause it was using spider web(i think) to contol Kohaku so he killed Sango and her father and the others ( demon slayers no one else) ... takes deep breath.... Sango tries to fight Kohaku off after he has killed everyone and then goes after her. The kingy guy tells his guards to shoot the two of them with arrows because ' they are possessed' so they die and are buried. Naraku kills the kingy guy to act as the hero.Sango is actully alive and comes out of her grave. While this was all happening Naraku told demons to attack the demon slayer village because their best warriors were gone.Thats how the village was destroyed ... back to sango. Naraku helps sango by puting bandages yada yada on . But he also puts a jewel shard in her. He tells her that Inuyasha has destroyed her village and that she should go get revenge.Also Naraku is using the alias Prince Kagasaki( or something close to that.) ...... Clears throat again...... I'm sure you know the rest of what happens if not please ask and I will only be too happy to tell you.'''''''''''' back to my opinion. JUst because Kikyo would not of married doesn't mean that Kaede can't.I mean Kagome is a miko and she is definitley gonna marry Inuyasha. So Kaede could have found happiness in life and not be like her sister.Anyways this is my review it is abnormally long.^_^ Hope you update soon! Love the story!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 19:10 CDT
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Hello I am ~Alanna when I am too lazy to login so ya...... hmmm I think kikyo pinned him to a tree because it was worse than dieing to be suspended in something between the world of the living and the dead, to never live but just be.Like how you are in a coma but you are never gonna wake up cause your brain is too damaged, you are a vegetable.Being a vegetable is way worse than dieing.That is why I think kikyo did that to him, because she felt betrayed and wanted revenge.I'm not entirely sure how u should incorporate the ganfg but i'm sure you will figure it out.
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: June 05, 2006 19:21 CDT
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Is it Kagome or kikyo....... please let it be Kagome cause no offense if you like her but I hate Kikyo.. Kikyo should just rot like she is supposed to.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 13:21 CDT
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hiya. i like the story. i have no idea what woolgathering means. but i can look it up. please keep writing more i think it will be very interesting.
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