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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 17:37 CDT
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hah funni update soon!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 14:05 CDT
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getting more interesting update soon!
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood- To lazy to log in On: July 28, 2006 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO XD I love it though it is very very corny and cheezy but hehe tis good stuff XD please update it soon ^_^ and I'll read more
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Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
??????where did you come up with this?????? I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! WRITE MORE! LOVE THIS WITH NARAKU, the bastard, I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 22:29 CDT
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awe poor sesshyy lol i wanna kno more about his temper mayb he'll beat people with sticks! lol just a thought. update soon!
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 not logged in On: July 01, 2006 23:08 CDT
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I like it so far and will be looking for updates
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Reviewed By: the critic On: July 01, 2006 00:34 CDT
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can i just say i almost fell out of my chair laughing after reading the first chapter? you're kidding right? this story makes absolutely no sense nor is there any real logic to it. with all the genres you categorised it under i was expecting something serious but c'mon! you can't expect anyone to take this seriously can you? after getting past the second chapter you're flow went to mush, where did the description go? all it was, was pointless ooc dialogue. i suggest you go back and review what you've written before writing any new chapters if you want to be taken seriously. it baffles me why people are giving you 10's - maybe they suspect its a comedy?
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 11:41 CDT
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i like it keep updatin. this is veryyy interestin. Just like raku to come up wit sometin like this
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Title: Experiment
Reviewed By: fluffy's cutiepie On: June 27, 2006 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story. it was just short but other than that it was great. its so good a story a actually reviewed. plz update. P.S. i love runaway puppy as well.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring (not logged in) On: June 22, 2006 21:05 CDT
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The potion idea, the way you presented it, doesn't make sense. Heating sperm will kill it. End of story. If you really want to go that direction, have Naraku use some other ingredients to make sperm cells survive. You know how egg white cooks when you heat it? Imagine that in a pot, and that's what you did. It's useless. It's protein. Also, I'm not a fan of your introduction. It was rather abrupt and unimaginative. There was no setting, there were grammar mistakes, and your choice of words was elementary. So basically, it's like every other regurgitated piece of cow droppings on this site. Now I'm going to sort through more of this "wonderful" drivel to find a true gem.
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 15:58 CDT
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now im interested lol update soon!
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Musa On: June 13, 2006 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it pleasepleasepleasepleasePLEASE write more^^
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Reviewed By: Mitsuri-chan On: June 11, 2006 21:38 CDT
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Not bad. You got a good plot going there. You could touch up your grammar a bit, but other than that, this is a very good start of a fic. ^__^
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Reviewed By: prettykittycat123 On: June 08, 2006 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. plz update soon. i beg you. so exiting. i wonder what they will do when they find out that they are all pregnant with narakus baby. this is gonna be a big hit in my book. plz update soon.
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Title: ~_~
Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 23:45 CDT
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Oh...I get to write the first review! Well...that's a first. Mpreg by way of vile potion. It's got promise... and I find the thought of Sesshoumaru pregnant freaking great. Upadte soon.
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