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Title: MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the title speaks for itself......thank you....i love your story that's why i reviewd twice.....
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Title: good!!
Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good, really good. sorry about you being sick though...hope you feel better.
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 15, 2006 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. I can't wait to see what he has for her. Your story is absolutely incredible keep up the good work. I hope you get well soon.
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Reviewed By: xSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't stop there XD you're an evil person -_- then again so am i but still T.T update soon before i die wondering what he has for her
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Reviewed By: Nae On: July 22, 2006 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahahaha, you're frickin' awesome. But cliffhangers annoy me. Please please keep going. fart out the chapters if you need to, but keep 'em coming.
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Reviewed By: sakurabloom On: July 18, 2006 01:14 CDT
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You gotta love the animes when they do that... or when they replay the whole Kikyo/Inu betrayal... lol. I swear, we get the picture by now. Anyways, great chapter but I am dying to know what is happening next! Is it because the child is a quarter demon?
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 17, 2006 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, I am very interested in this story. I figure that you do not want hard criticisms; just whether we like or no like. My answer is "I like." You get to your points really fast (no lingering here though sometimes I wish you would linger a little) and you provide us with alot of cliffhangers. The plot is very interesting and is progressing along nicely. How many chapters are you planning, or, are you just writing as you go along? Anyways, glad your giving us the chance to read it! Thank you, Cynbad146
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: AznxPurity (nsi) On: July 17, 2006 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you can't do that! i have to know what happens T.T i'm dieing here let me know what happens wahhhhh update soon!
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 17:12 CDT
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interesting. i like this, new and unused. update soon there r so many different ways this cud go.
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Reviewed By: sakurabloom On: June 30, 2006 14:24 CDT
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Ahh!! Cliffy!! Is he going to ask her to marry him?!?! And whats wrong with the baby? I hope you update soon!! Good Chapter!! :o)
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Reviewed By: AznxPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 00:10 CDT
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You can't do that! your so mean =( i NEED to know what going to happen it just killing me please update soon i'm begging you... cause if you don't i might just kill someone in anxitey
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: June 29, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kept seeing this story and passing it over. Finally, I decided to check it out. Boy, am I glad that I did. I think that your storyline has a pretty good plot of a different twist. I am not a professional critic; just a big time reader. My thoughts are that I am not out to pick over your grammar, however, sometimes I found myself wishing for more details in some (but not all) of your intense emotional scenes, to perfect your great story. I really like your work. Like Arnold says it, "I'll bee back!" Thank you for sharing, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: AznxPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 22:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah i still love it so keep updating ^.^
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Reviewed By: sakurabloom On: June 21, 2006 15:40 CDT
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what the heck!? he can't just say yes i'll marry you. i hope he loves her! ugh!! dumb boys.. i do hope they baby will live :o) i hope kagome and inuyasha can be civil to each other when they are married! anyways, good job :o)
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Reviewed By: C.A. (not signed in) On: June 20, 2006 15:50 CDT
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I really like this story. Lots of different twists and roadblocks to get through. Keep up the good work with the story. Can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: midnight_sapphire_blue On: June 08, 2006 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow only 15? you've got real potential here from what i've read. you don't just let things by, you aknowledge them, help them grow , then resolve them in a logical way. I congradulate you for keeping it up and not just stopping in the middle of it because it would be a crime not to, so keep up the good work a word of advice to make it easier, plan out your chapters write down ideas for future chapters, cause if you don't theres always the chance that you might get writtets block, which really sucks ass
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Reviewed By: AznxPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 18:38 CDT
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I like it =D it uhhh keeps me guessing lol well great story btw
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