| "Secret Arrangements" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: jujubean On: November 07, 2007 15:39 CST
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i loved every chapter and i hope you write more
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Reviewed By: ^.^ On: October 03, 2007 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ooh, I loved that! :D Reading hentai during school is the best. Update soon, pleaseplease!
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Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, if you waited a while to update I waited awhile to read. -and boy am I sorry both took a while! Another great chapter written with a good mix of humor and sex. It was so easy to imagine the look on Ed's face when he walked in and saw Al. Throwing Winry in there was a good twist. Then the turn from humor into hot sexy goodness! Wonderful. Just enough dirty talk to make it even better. I hope there's more chapters to look forward to.
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Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 19:50 CDT
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It was awesome as usual Zakai-sama. I hope to read more of your stuff as always.
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Title: I love this story
Reviewed By: YaoiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely forgot about this site until you updated "Secret Arrangements". Thanks for the reminder! And thanks for the update! It was soooo very enjoyable to reread this chapter (for the 20th time) I love this fic. XD
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Reviewed By: YaoiGirl On: January 10, 2007 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always enjoyed your writing on this and other sites but this is awsome! I love it! It's crass, it's dirty, it's rude and very well written. Full marks. I actually like that Ed didn't just barge back in. He's plotting against Mustang, perfect. A very exciting addition to the story. I can't wait 'til you get to the Elricest! XD
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Reviewed By: Lady Emi-chan On: December 03, 2006 12:24 CST
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Wooohooo! I really enjoy your fic. Verrrry nice threesome action. I spy NO OOC and I love it! This fic is hot, dirty and hilarious. I laughed out loud, and my mother asked what I was laughing at. "Umm....noootthiing..." Hee hee, anyway, I really like this, and would like to see more chapters of this lil threesome action. I wanna see some Elricest!
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Reviewed By: Queenphoenix7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Woah. That's, like, all I can say. I've read the first chapter before - I'm pleased there's more now.
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Reviewed By: Child Xylia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 23:45 CDT
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I've read Chapter 3 already on Fanfiction.net, but repition never hurts. =) Chapter 4 is just gonna be...wow. Haha, I keep getting this little moment in my head of Ed and Al just sitting on a couch in Mustang's apartment, completely silent except a clock ticking, waiting for the Colonel to arrive. Maybe then Ed would say "Well...this is a little awkward." =D Maybe...
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Reviewed By: Arbitrary Doom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 00:57 CDT
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........very interusting...........i couldnt imagen al being the kinky one untill now..........any way.............good story..........XP!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, so far! I can't think of anything critical to point out. Keep up the amazing work, and I'll be back to review after the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Child Xylia (I have an account) On: August 09, 2006 23:17 CDT
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Oh, wow, please update chapter 3. I found FMA lacking in lemons until recently. =D I mean, just...wow. *Lets breath out slowly* Trust me, I was very happy at work today. XD Hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: milkytoast On: July 30, 2006 16:59 CDT
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HAH! I like the twist that they are going to get Mustang back! THAT is definitely Elrics at their finest - working together :)
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So. uh.... O_o is Al like human an not robot anymore? Its good.
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Reviewed By: cryo On: June 15, 2006 01:09 CDT
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Mmm, PWP of this quality I didn't expect to find on Mediaminer :) Nice intensity between the three of them, and it leaves the reader yearning for more - was the whole thing a set-up? Or just coincidence? What else will happen? Very nice :)
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