| "Captured in Charcoal" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: tearlesereph [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh~~! omg this is sooo good! You've gotta continue and write more!! It says you haven't updated in may.. why'd you stop >_ |
Reviewed By: OddBallSlasher(@aol.com) On: September 29, 2002 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol sometimes im a bit hard on those i rate so dont feel bad if u feel u deserved better in any of the categories! lol and the overall rating was more like a 9.8 for your information ^_^ and i was wondering if u were gonna continue soon? i really want to see more! its really an awesome fic and im a bit addicted!so PLEASE write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue, onegai!!!! Kudasai! Kudasai! (sorry for being rude....I just really want to read more....^.^')
This is a fantastic fic. I look forward to reading more of it. Continue!!!!!!! ONEGAI!!!!
Uh.....ummmm......*bows head in shame and embarassment* gomen. Momentary slip of sanity.........
Arigatou!!!!
Ja~
Anata |
Reviewed By: PawsCat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just rediscovered this fic after having lost track of it for a while, and I'm pleasantly amazed at how far you've gotten in it. I can't wait to see how it ends up. |
Reviewed By: Skyler On: June 13, 2002 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yeah and For Heero too, fantastic discription. He he he!!! |
Reviewed By: Skyler On: June 13, 2002 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was awesome so far and extremely discriptive!!! I loved it please do hurry and write more!!!Cause if you don't i might go crazy!!lol j/k .... well sorta. he he good description for duo>>>>!!!*very sexy*!!!>>>>>>>>>>^^ |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2002 15:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love it! Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: K inkyuums On: May 05, 2002 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That fanfic was awesome! I loved every minute of it! Please write more chapters! |
Reviewed By: kinkyuums On: May 05, 2002 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font colorThis fanfic was kickass. |
Reviewed By: Deathsythe-Hell-Gurl On: April 14, 2002 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story please write more chapters.It is the best I have ever read and I read
about five stories a week and have been reading since 2000 and this is the second story I have ever reviewed. |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: April 10, 2002 21:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool, I like the new one. Oi, I am so bad at writing these things, but thanks for answering my questions. Hope to see another soon. I like this story alot. Especially the art stuff. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Miyu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2002 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write some more soon! please? |
Reviewed By: Duo_Maxwell_1985 On: April 03, 2002 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is fantastic!!! Keep going or I'll go mad! lol j/k .... sorta. ^_^' Anyhow, I really like the way you portray Heero in this fic. It's funny to see how nervous he gets around Duo. :) |
Reviewed By: selena281 On: November 24, 2002 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this fic! (I'm an art student too, so this fic hits close to home. I also mostly fit heero's personality)
You've given exceptional care to the characters and their personalities, and the exchange of dialogue is also handled beautifully. Definately keep working on this. every chapter has been written so well, i can't wait to see what will happen.
*happily glomps* |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: April 06, 2002 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definately like this one so far. I like the way you have Heero's charactor, lonely. Not computerlike. Question though: in the fic you said he had had the same arguement about what he was going to do with his life. With whom? His parents? And while we're on that subject, where are his parents? Is he in a dorm room?
I know, I ask to many questions. Sorry. But, this is a great fic. Please, write more soon. |
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