| "Captured in Charcoal" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: Duo_Maxwell_1985 On: April 03, 2002 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is fantastic!!! Keep going or I'll go mad! lol j/k .... sorta. ^_^' Anyhow, I really like the way you portray Heero in this fic. It's funny to see how nervous he gets around Duo. :) |
Reviewed By: selena281 On: November 24, 2002 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this fic! (I'm an art student too, so this fic hits close to home. I also mostly fit heero's personality)
You've given exceptional care to the characters and their personalities, and the exchange of dialogue is also handled beautifully. Definately keep working on this. every chapter has been written so well, i can't wait to see what will happen.
*happily glomps* |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: April 06, 2002 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definately like this one so far. I like the way you have Heero's charactor, lonely. Not computerlike. Question though: in the fic you said he had had the same arguement about what he was going to do with his life. With whom? His parents? And while we're on that subject, where are his parents? Is he in a dorm room?
I know, I ask to many questions. Sorry. But, this is a great fic. Please, write more soon. |
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