| "It's All Relative" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: me On: July 04, 2006 18:16 CDT
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I LOVE THIS FIC! ohmygad! i can't wait for more updates! i love your characterizations of the boys I am curious to know what will come of Crawford's vision yay!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Nariel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 08:00 CDT
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I like the story very much so far and will also continue reading, if you update... you better! *waggles finger* Absolutely rocking fic. I usually dislike the pairing Crawford/Aya, because Aya is mostly shown as the poor deprived delicate flower, but you keep them enjoyably in character, go you! Especially SchuSchu... sorry, I meant no disrespect, oh great Schuldig! *hides under table* Aherm. hope to see an incoming new-chapter-alert-mail soon, or maybe one from you? Yours, Nari-chan.
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Reviewed By: me again On: June 24, 2006 19:46 CDT
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this is getting better and better! i can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Riva On: June 20, 2006 20:01 CDT
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I love the beginning of this story. I've always been intrigued by the idea of Aya working with Schwartz. Thank you for coming up with a good continuation of the story from where Gluhen ends. I hate that ending. This seems like a really interesting beginning and I'm curious to see where you are going to take it. I'm looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Terrific beginning. A believable and intriguing possibility. I wonderful if Aya and Brad can come to agreement on appropriate candidates for assassination (given Aya's determination not to simply become a murderer, even if that is how he persistently perceives himself). Loved Schuldig's comment about the use of his bed; recognition that Farfarello and Nagi have sought their own paths; and overall how in character are the characters. I eagerly wait for more.
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Reviewed By: ZParker On: June 12, 2006 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending of Gluhen sucked and I'm so glad that you decided to write an alternate ending involving Schwarz. It really pissed me off that after defeating pure evil, that Ran would allow himself to be killed by a street rat. Thank you so much for writing this and I honestly hope that you will continue writing this story.
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Title: tres bien!
Reviewed By: me On: June 12, 2006 02:40 CDT
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what a beginning! this has great possibility - i cant wait to see where you take it waiting for an update :)
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: June 11, 2006 14:36 CDT
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Interesting beginning. I'm afraid I tend to ignore Gluhen so some of it is lost on me. But definitely worth puzzling things out. Gods, the spam code is YEEK.
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Title: thanks
Reviewed By: LilyMoonsAlias [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 13:14 CDT
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I believe I corrected the problem. Fingers crossed.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 12:30 CDT
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oh, good beginning! You might want to have a look at what mm.org did to your formatting, though. I always check my chapter after uploading--once it cut off in the middle of a word, and half my chapter didn't get uploaded at all.
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