| "Broken Shadows and Hidden Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Gilden Fox On: December 18, 2006 19:45 CST
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Nice. I love the story so far. And does Kairu/Avion like Kagome? Well update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Redgoblin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
There was some spelling and grammer mistakes. I find your story entertaining. You make your characters very real. You have taken the original chars to a good level. I look forward to reading more of your story.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 19:57 CDT
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This seems pretty cool also a little confusing at times but w/e. Update soon ^_^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lone Shadow On: August 27, 2006 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me again. Just wanted to say that I still love the story so far. I think that you do nicely on the OCs. The other characters Dran and Darrin seem to be complete opisets. And Tayor, Sade, and Nahana are cool too. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: InuYoukaiDragon On: August 19, 2006 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon. really enjoy the story. I also think that you are doing a great job on your OCs. Tahani and Nahana are really cool. Update!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: JowlinShadow On: August 19, 2006 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is an awsome story. I really like the details of it so far. Keep updating PLZ???!!!!
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Title: still good.
Reviewed By: sesshyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 20:03 CDT
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Hey, I just wanna let you know, I don't think you should delay posting the story just because you want reviews. That's breaking the rules (didn't you read them?), even if you don't have time to type. I only have 2 reviews, but more visits because I update faster. Anyway, the story is coming out nicely, even though there's a lot of OCs. I like how you shaped personalities for Dran, Darrin, Nahana, and Sade. Nahana likes flirting with boys and not listening, and Sade is a little bit slow. as I said before, (though I was not logged in) keep it up!
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Title: Perfect!
Reviewed By: Lone Shadow On: August 09, 2006 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story of yours is coming out perfectly. It isn't boring at all. I am not one that likes ocs eather but I do agree with WindDemon, I like Tahani. Please update ASAP. Need to read more!
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Reviewed By: WindDemon On: August 01, 2006 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally, I don't really like OCs but Tahani is very well done. I enjoyed it overall and it's well written, you have your own personal style, I like that.
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Morning Sun On: July 30, 2006 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chaoter was great. I really loved it! I hope that you up date soon so I can read on! (sorry... Im hyper!^.^) but seriously, I really enjoyed readin this chapter. And Is that Tahani girl really a demon? Can't wait till update...*twich*O.o
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Reviewed By: Mian On: June 24, 2006 20:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Would this count as your fourth reveiw?
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Reviewed By: Mian On: June 24, 2006 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Wonderful story! I'm surprized that this is only your third reveiw. Totally great idea. There really aren't enough Sesshy fics, ya'know.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for Looking at my story, I do like yours however I find it is not necesary for you to spell Sesshomaru's name with a hyphen, howeve it is a free country and you may do anything that you so choose. Hehe I'm talking stoicly like Sesshy.^_^ I don't really like Sesshy, but it's fun to call him that cause i know he would hate it.lol. Update!! Oh and I added a new chapter to my story, Ch.3 Commodore Sesshomaru.
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Title: Nice.
Reviewed By: sesshyfan On: June 15, 2006 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was pretty good. I'd never be able to imagine Sessho-Maru being nice. Or giving advice to Inuyasha about love. I can't wait for the next chapter, because even though this was sort of boring, leads are almost always boring. Also, I like this better than other stories, since they have things placed in the present time and not in the Fuedal Era. Good job, keep it up.
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