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Title: ahsayuni2000
Reviewed By: ahsayuni2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude that was so awsome! But i have one question. Will the fox ever come back out? Sorry but Ihave to know. Other than that mna great job one of the best I've ever read.
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Title: Fucking Awesome:)
Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that wz so fucking awesome!!!!and u know wat?...that bitch sakura needs 2 die!..stupid ho always tryin 2 feel suske up...sexual harass is bad!..anyway...i luv this fic...i really do it's good...but i won't wanna read it evr again if society doesn't ecept them and neither will alot other pplz so make a wise decidion!^^(just givin sum 4rendly advice)
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Title: Fucking Awesome:)
Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that wz so fucking awesome!!!!and u know wat?...that bitch sakura needs 2 die!..stupid ho always tryin 2 feel suske up...sexual harass is bad!..anyway...i luv this fic...i really do it's good...but i won't wanna read it evr again if society doesn't ecept them and neither will alot other pplz so make a wise decidion!^^(just givin sum 4rendly advice)
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Great job!
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Reviewed By: NejixLee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 22:01 CST
Comment/Review:
It's awesome, just wanted to see a continuaton. I mean sakura's face is just gonna drop hahahaha And i wonder what the others would thnk too, since i have seen many endings like that, it wasn't great. Just for the fact that your not continuing, too bad i was so into it.
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Title: Nice! ^_^
Reviewed By: Arsenic_Dimentia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this ending. Rot-your-teeth sweet! ^^; Overall, this fic was okay; I saw a few mistakes, and I recommend that you work on your style of writing. The sex scene was good, too; I noticed you said that this was your first time with yaoi, but I must warn you that hardcore fangirls will throw a fit if you don't have the characters use lubricant. XP I know, it's weird, but the truth. Good luck with any future writings, though! =)
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED THE STORY!!! But I agree with Gacktluvr yo should maybe add a honey moon or the face that Sakura is going to make when she finds out. *I could just imagine it now* It was great I give you a 10
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Reviewed By: Gacktluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 17:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Awww, that was adorable! Great ending too, but I think you should add in the honeymoon or soomething..*wink*
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Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 04:16 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is AWSOME! Cant wait to read the next chappie!!! Please update soon! Sooo hot! *bounces and giggles like an insane person on speed* YAY! ^-^
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Title: Woo! XD
Reviewed By: Arsenic_Dimentia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 04:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice update! You're very good at writing make-out scenes... and I can't wait to see what your smut scenes are like! I know, I know, I'm pervy, but that can be a good thing. I think. Oh, and you also listened to my advice!! *dances* I love when people do that... it makes me feel all warm and happy. Thank you! =)
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Title: Awesome.
Reviewed By: Arsenic_Dimentia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic seems to have potential. ^-^ However, I must point out that you need to put line breaks in between your paragraphs. Line breaks (hitting the "Enter" button) are essential because the reader's eyes have room to rest; the white and the black colors have to clash, as well as be even. Other than that, this story is really good, and I hope that you update SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Nomistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is like a drug for me, please add more soon.
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Reviewed By: Starfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 10:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok where's the rest? you are planning to continue with this, yes? it is definitly something I would more then enjoy reading more of.
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Reviewed By: kuro mizu On: July 05, 2006 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE THIS! Plz continue i havnt been able to read a good 'omg im a demon in heat' for 2 yrs and its my faveorite type of fanfic!!! Ur kissing scenes.. heh well 15 for those. Suggestion: i have no clue what ur gonna do w/ this but if sasuand naru ever get together it gets annoying when one is all like 'omg i like kisses' after some thought (even though they were all like OMGHEJUSTKISSEDMEETF at first) and the others like 'smut fest!' id prefer if u didnt do that but hell its ur fic
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Reviewed By: Mystaira On: July 04, 2006 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah!! Meanie! *pouts* Just when it was getting good. I hope you update sometime soon. >.>;
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