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| "Deception's Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry it took so long to review, Mediaminer was being mean an saying you only accepted reviews from registered members, even after I logged in! =_= Anyway...I enjoyed this chapter more than I did the first one! The bath scene made me giggle---poor Yuugi, not used to being scrubbed down. This fic is moving quicker than I anticipated. I didn't expect Yuugi to return to the palace so soon, but I have to admit, I love your little plot twist! I guess we'll learn more about Yuugi's mark in later chapters, hm? Excellent job with this chapter! Keep up the outstanding work! This is one of the best Puzzleshipping fics I've come across in a while and I'm dying to see more of it!
| Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is going well so far and I can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep up with the good work!
| Title: O...M...G!!!
Reviewed By: Hells_gatekepper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I loved the way you portrayed Yugi throughout the story, and Atemu was very kind and gentle, and that made me totally ecstatic cuz he's my favorite. I hope you continue, and I do hope issues with your kidney and b/f get better. I know none of that is fun at all. Take care and update soon. And last, if I could trouble you just a little, could you take a look at my work? I would like to know if any of my work matches up to all the other great fanfics like yours that I read out there. Okay, that's it. Update soon!
| Title: O...M...G!!!
Reviewed By: Hells_gatekepper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I loved the way you portrayed Yugi throughout the story, and Atemu was very kind and gentle, and that made me totally ecstatic cuz he's my favorite. I hope you continue, and I do hope issues with your kidney and b/f get better. I know none of that is fun at all. Take care and update soon. And last, if I could trouble you just a little, could you take a look at my work? I would like to know if any of my work matches up to all the other great fanfics like yours that I read out there. Okay, that's it. Update soon!
| Reviewed By: YamiTenshi93 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! That is so cool!! I liked it allot so please try to update fast! eventhoe i was a bit shocked when the dancer turned out to be a boy we all know and love, i kind of expected it. I think that no one else is suted for Yami (or atem) better than Yugi!!! Thats cool so please update soon!!! ~~ YamiTenshi93
| Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I'm stunned. This is one awesome fic! You've got the characters down pat, the chapter is well-written and flows well, and you left it on a humerous cliffhanger to boot! Poor Atemu, that must've been quite a shock to find that his delicious little dancer was actually a boy! Can't wait to see how he takes it, and also Yuugi's reaction to almost being raped. I love this story already. Please update soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 16:59 CDT
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^_^ Lol, that was really funny, the way Atemu found out Yugi was a guy. And those Isis wings are amazing, I wanna buy a pair just for fun! Anyway, a very good start to the story, I hope the next few chapters are just as good or better. And keep working on "My Slave For All Times", k? Cya!
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