| "Within the Pale White Light" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: lol.
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 14:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL i just started reading, and i LOVEEEEEEE how you got Tucker,Church,and Simmons into there. And dont tell me "?" we both no they from RvB :P
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap. I am so into this story like Choji is into a bag of chips. I don't know anything about halo, but it seems awesome as hell. This story has my full attention, and I can not wait to see what happens next. I can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: AuronX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have definately created a very unique situation, one that I honestly haven't come across before. It is a very interesting concept and I rather like it. Getting them in the Halo world hasn't been explained at all. You really should explain how in one way or another or else the story may lose some of its hold if people get annoyed by the oddity of the situation. I was a littl annoyed by the lack of explaination. You have a problem with your spelling however. Sometimes. Just be careful. Keep up the writing, you're doing a great job and using a very unique concept. I'm looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you've definitely got me hooked! The renegades don't really even have to break Gaara free. Just sneak him a few handfuls of sand... and stand back. Keep those updates coming.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 01:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update asap!! I'm hooked to this story!My computer is messed up . . . didn't even put the whole review I wrote up on there the first time.
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKAY! I know nothing of Helo
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