| "Within the Pale White Light" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sharktooth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story butlike most fanfics it has been abandonded
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Reviewed By: DeathRaptor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story but it seems to be abandoned but ill still leave a review really interesting ive never seen anything like this so i decided to check it out and read read all the chapters in one day i was sad when there were no more chapters so im gonna keep checking back on this hoping for an update
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 19:39 CST
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I guess this is just one more I can add to the 'abandoned' pile. Damn.
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Reviewed By: AlixNix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story, I've never played Halo though, so it was a bit confusing. I like the idea of Naruto crossing over with a sci-fi. :)
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 13:32 CST
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Hey! What's going on with this one? Please don't tell me you've given up. It's too good not to finish.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Hyrulehalfbreed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Has to keep going!!
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Reviewed By: AuronX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done a great job with fixing up your spelling and grammer. That alone has made your story far easier to read. The charater development is interesting, leaving just enough to the imagination and making me wonder what's going to come next. I think I'll have my eyes on Naruto and Gaara for the next little while, and I can't wait to see where things go with Keyes now that she's hooked up with Gaara and Temari. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 20:17 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHA!!! I couldn't help but burst out laughing there in the end!! That was great, and i am freaking so excited. I can't wait to read more. I'm completely hooked on this story!!
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Title: lol.
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 14:15 CDT
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LOL i just started reading, and i LOVEEEEEEE how you got Tucker,Church,and Simmons into there. And dont tell me "?" we both no they from RvB :P
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap. I am so into this story like Choji is into a bag of chips. I don't know anything about halo, but it seems awesome as hell. This story has my full attention, and I can not wait to see what happens next. I can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: AuronX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have definately created a very unique situation, one that I honestly haven't come across before. It is a very interesting concept and I rather like it. Getting them in the Halo world hasn't been explained at all. You really should explain how in one way or another or else the story may lose some of its hold if people get annoyed by the oddity of the situation. I was a littl annoyed by the lack of explaination. You have a problem with your spelling however. Sometimes. Just be careful. Keep up the writing, you're doing a great job and using a very unique concept. I'm looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you've definitely got me hooked! The renegades don't really even have to break Gaara free. Just sneak him a few handfuls of sand... and stand back. Keep those updates coming.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 01:14 CDT
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Update asap!! I'm hooked to this story!My computer is messed up . . . didn't even put the whole review I wrote up on there the first time.
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKAY! I know nothing of Helo
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