| "A New Shadow" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: jex On: June 28, 2006 17:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story, please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: nojico On: June 18, 2006 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this shit is so damn funny!
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Title: FUNNY
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 15:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
ITS NICE JUST SNEAK A PROFILE AT THE LIBARY OR USE A INTERNET CAFE HEY WHY WONT YOUR PARENTS LET YOU GET ONE ITLS NOT LIKE ITS WELL UMMM A PORNO SITE OH WELL UP DATE SOON LOL
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Reviewed By: Looly On: June 16, 2006 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
The basic plot is pretty good, but the video @ McDonalds? I mean, no offense or anything, but that's really random. If you're gonna be random, then you have to go all the way. Good luck...
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