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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: May 01, 2008 14:55 CDT
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What is your problem? How could you write such a intriging story and not update since 07? I'm mad at you. It's hard to find good Zutara fics. I wish you'd update, but I doubt my review will change your mind. I think it's a great begining to a great story. I think this story has so much potential. Don't give up on it. If you need help. There are plenty of people who are willing to lend you a hand. inurinsama on fanfiction.net is one of them. Don't give up. Not now...
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Reviewed By: Azera_Vader [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 06:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: loopy911 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! ~so far anyway~ BUT! there are some miner mistakes...ssssoooo.... could I edit this??
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Reviewed By: Kitana_is_number_one [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 01:03 CDT
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plz put another chappie up soon. it was awsome.
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Title: great job
Reviewed By: Twesty'slove On: July 30, 2007 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi just pasing by to say that i LOVED IT!!!!, every word of it, im also a zutarian and i truly hope u update soon, im truly goin insane if i dont read more of the story!!!!, i also agree that you should make the chapters longer, beside that everything its just perfect, keep up to good work, we dont find good fictions like this one soo easy this days!! oh! and by the way, i also love your work with the pics, ur gifted women!!!!!!!!! se yaa!!!!
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Reviewed By: darkmistress in the shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 13:47 CDT
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What the hell? Why aren't you making anymore chapters? Now, I'm sad... Okay, so please continue, or it's all your fault that I'm mad today. Hurry!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 20:10 CST
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hey, you have a great begginning to this fic, i just hope that you will continue onward with it. ^_^ hope to read you soon!
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Reviewed By: Doris On: December 03, 2006 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: iluvsesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way this is starting. I bet Zuko is estatic. He's finally get laid. He really does you know; all that pent-up anger is not healthy for a person. MUAHAHAHAHAH!!!! >:D Please, continue.
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Title: Good Start...
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I like what I am reading...really good start. I hope you update soon, I really would like to see what direction this story goes.
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Reviewed By: Driving Lessons On: October 02, 2006 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good! I liked your style of writing! Update soon...Please! The grammar is tons betters than in most of the other ones I read. Well Done!
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Reviewed By: Silver Armada [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 19:19 CDT
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I strongly encourage you to update. This first chapter has the makings of a great fic and I'd love to see it finished.
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Reviewed By: Daisuke-n-Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I honestly am not the type of person who goes for short reviews... but I'm only aloud to write so much. So, it's a nicely done fanfic. Though I think that you should have maybe lengthened it out a little bit more. (laughs) Then again... I would be smacking myself considering I'm the type of writer who enjoys to stop it at a cliffhanger spot and keep readers wondering. (laughs) My nature I guess. But as for this... this is pure torture beyond all. Considering the fact you have not updated in quite a while. But anyway, Grammar is decent, the enjoyment factor is great, and curiousity of what's going to happen next still captures me. I do hope to see you continue on with this story. It's very well done. I love the description you've laid out in this as well as I enjoy the dialogue. Very fresh indeed. I don't see to many of this fics. I do hope to see you carry on. Well I do believe that takes care of most of my rambling. Please do continue. Until next time... ~Cheers! Any questions, comments or concerns please do not hesitate to write/e-mail me. Keep up the wonderful work! Can't wait to read more!
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Title: Bandit
Reviewed By: Bandit_The_Army_Brat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ameriserei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 04:06 CDT
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That was a great start and though Zuko was a bit OOC, I really like the set up and where this is going. I hope you add a new chapter soon. Keep up the good work. ~ A.A.R.
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