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Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA his balls were on fire LOL UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: ChocoBits Daioh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 16:16 CDT
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Hahahaha.Great new update.Carry On!carry on....
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Reviewed By: xPrincess Gothx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 18:13 CDT
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i liked the fanfic.it waz funny so write more chapters pleez
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Reviewed By: wolfram01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 18:22 CDT
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you should write a prequel and I'm also sorry that I don't know much about japanese words all to well.^~^ Please update soon
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Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 13:44 CDT
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oh and lets go can also be like ikimashyo and stuff. and i dont usually like to add 'y' so i would write it like ikimasho or daijobu.
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Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 13:42 CDT
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ok lets see..... Lets go: iko Are you okay?: Daijyoubu(desu ka?) Come: koi (I think....) wait: matte, machi nasai, chotto matte, etc. stop: tomare, yamette, yame nasai, yamero, etc. chakra: in english its spelled 'chakra' in japanese they say chakura, but in japanese they usually silence the 'u' in 'ku' for a lot of words. oh and update ASAP!!!
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: akelenta On: July 20, 2006 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it nice i know what the cloak guy ment.... itachi and orochimaru.... those eyes must have been itachis.......
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Reviewed By: Crazy me!! On: June 16, 2006 06:37 CDT
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Lol I luv this story so far. It's very funny. Please update soon! Oh and I dun know about da others in japanese but I know that "Are you ok?" is "Daijyoubu?" or something like that and "Stop" is like "Yamette" or "Yametteyo"
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