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Reviewed By: kye On: January 08, 2008 23:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 13:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So you don't have alot of time to write and I don't have alot of time to read...fair trade, neh? Sorry it took me so long to catch back up! I've so enjoyed this fic and I'm glad that you continue to update when you can. Keep it comin'! I'll keep reading and enjoying! Yeah...Hiei and Botan are being weird. And I'm really enjoying the way things are working out between Yoko and Kagome. He's what she's been needing and it's about time she found someone who could appreciate her in ways that Inuyasha seems incapable of at the moment. Thanks again for sharing the wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: YoukoKurama201 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 16:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God. You are an amazing author! Please update again soon! This is a great story!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 05:45 EST
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This was an awesome chapter! One of my favorites, in fact. Why? Kouga. I do so love that wolf! ^_~ The whole bit with Inuyasha, Kouga, and Youko insulting each other and scrapping a bit, in-between making claims on Kagome, just tickled my funnybone. It wasn't until right at the end there that Inu made an actual claim, though. As usual, he was simply denying anyone else's, without committing himself. Finally, he played the time-travel and rosary cards. Unfortunately, by that time, Youko was noticing something else, and taking off with Kagome. LOL!!! Thank you so very much for having Youko say all the things Kouga, and all the rest of us, have been wanting to say to Inu all this time! And I loved it that Kouga acknowledged that. Yay for calling a corpse-lover a corpse-lover! LOL!! And for pointing out that he had left Kagome vulnerable when he had promised to protect her. I don't think it sunk in, though. I hope Inu gets to thinking about it, after he realizes that Youko just TOOK her and LEFT. LOL!! As far as I'm concerned, Inu still needs to admit to himself, and to her, what a stupid jerk he's been. Poor, poor Kouga. He never stood a chance. *sigh* (At least, not in THIS fic. He'll just have to wait it out on the sidelines with Hiei this time around, ne? You know, I'd love to see you do a Hiei/Kag and a Kouga/Kag someday. ^_^) Having Youko caught in the chicken wire was a nice touch. Yep. Kagome should have known that introducing something from the future into the past could have bad consequences. Though youko might disagree, since he got to spend the night with her because of it. Oh! And Shippou just accepted his words, and let him choose to sleep either by her side or on her chest. Seems like he has a preference in the battle for Kagome's heart. He's seen Inu hurt her too many times. I can't wait to see what Youko realized or noticed that made him grab Kag and go. But I have to tell you how much I enjoyed your colorful descriptions: the poppy blossoms on Kagome's yukata and the tension crackling in the air like soy sauce in a hot saucepan, -- niiiice!! Thanks for keeping me entertained! ^_^
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Title: ...and yet another suitor...
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 16:23 EST
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right now...i just want to be kags. She has a demon wolf prince who loves her, a stubborn hot hanyou who she travels around with, a cute monk who touches her, sesshoumaru - who everyone pairs her up with cuz they look good together, and now BOTH kuramas......meh.... great new chappie!! the arguing was well written without feeling too "practiced". I wonder where yoko and kagome went? ...hrm... this story is like the only story where i root for BOTH suitors for kags. weird.... oh yeah, random questions: Do you listen to this russian/euro pop duo called t.A.T.u.? Theyre realy good, even though some of their songs are about lesbianism.... i recommend them. just dont look them up on youtube. ;) you'll get a whole bunch of yuri stuff... yeah anyway...update soon!! (well, sooner than me, lol) beckyducky over and out!!
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Title: ChibiRin (offline)
Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 12:32 EST
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I'm all for Youko and Kagome livin' it up for the moment. Kouga and Inuyasha are just being belligerent right now.
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Reviewed By: KuKIChan On: November 23, 2007 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the best fanfic I read in a while ! love it
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 09:31 EST
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Guys They are so troublesome... I can toally relate to Kagome right now... Just want to smash Kougas and Inuyasha's face in... Isnt it obvious she loves Youko more come one peeps just give up.... but they are guys what can you expect... The Chapter was Awsome!!!! Happy Thankgiving!!! hope u had lots of Turkey...
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 (not logged in) On: November 22, 2007 12:16 EST
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 23:29 EST
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haha loved the chapter now i wonder where youko took kagome it'll be interesting to see how inuyasha and kouga react when they find out that kagome and youko have been long gone. as always ill be waiting for the next update!!!
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, Shippo is the best lier ever. Ohh, Yoko the naughty little bastard!xD I was waitin for when Kouga would show up, and I love how it happened. He needs to get his ass kicked.
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Reviewed By: Not logged in LM Kitsune On: November 21, 2007 22:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Weird, it cut off some in the first one. xD) Dude, Shippo is the best lier ever. Ohh, Yoko the naughty little bastard!xD I was waitin for when Kouga would show up, and I love how it happened. He needs to get his ass kicked.
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Reviewed By: Not logged in LM Kitsune On: November 21, 2007 22:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, Shippo is the best lier ever. Ohh, Yoko the naughty little bastard!xD I was waitin for when Kouga would show up, and I love how it happened. He needs to get his ass kicked.
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Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 19:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the chapters are always amazing! i love, and i mean LOVE that fight at the end. i was thrilled that the three of them were going at it and saying things that i want to say to inuyasha and kouga most of the time. but where did kagome and yoko disappear to, hmm? please update again very, very, very soon!!!!! i love reading this story and it really makes my day when i get the email saying it's been updated! i cannot wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: YoukaiTsukiko On: November 19, 2007 02:27 EST
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Wow...this story is just amazing, I've spent the whole day reading it. Yay for yummy foxes. lol anyway you need to update soon!!! That is such a depressing cliffhanger it made me want to cry (not that it was sad, but cause it was like a major duh duh duuuuh what will happen next kinda thing) Update soon! Ja
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