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| "Not the Only One" Reviews/Comments [ 570 ] | | Pages (38): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: Love the story:D
Reviewed By: Petrice [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 19:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story really sad that it ended just wen it was gettin good. Really hope you update soon, i understand that you have a life outside this site but i really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter:) Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope your 2nd year in college went okay for you. x | Title: Love the story:D
Reviewed By: Petrice [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 19:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story really sad that it ended just wen it was gettin good. Really hope you update soon, i understand that you have a life outside this site but i really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter:) Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope your 2nd year in college went okay for you. x | Reviewed By: Namine02 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Kami! So I know you already have a lot of reviewers, but congratulations, you just gained another. First off, I want to say I understand with the whole life getting in the way bit, lol. I love the plot line for this, as well as how you kept most of the characters in, well, character. You've done really well so far and I am exceptionally impressed with this story as of now. The little snippets that were in the last chapter have risen some major questions and definitely sparked my interest. I'll be keeping an eye on this story and await the time when you post a new chapter. Good luck! --Namime: Wolf Hybrid of the West
| Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 08:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've noticed some spelling errors, though I am in the states. I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier, but I recently got my internet back, and I just found the fic again. I love this fic, I rarely find many good fics with Kurama, with both Yoko and Kurama...avatar in modern times, that is! :D Ever since I first saw him on the show, I've been a loyal Kurama fan. Please update soon! I'll be waiting eagerly for it!
| Reviewed By: Lady MoonShadow1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 12:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EVIL!!!!!!
| Title: AMAZING!!!!
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 21:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! Please take all the time you need lol I know how school goes and the rest of life. I love everything from the drama, love triangle, limes, lemons, etc. You are truly gifted.
| Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 21:09 EDT
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I hope you update soon. This story is absolutely fabulous! Keep up the great work and return to us soon! =)
| Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2010 03:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You know, I gave up reading YYH/IY crossovers about 4 years ago because I just couldn't find any more good ones...By "good" I mean, proper grammar, spelling, canon characterizations, interesting plot, humor, and, of course, romance. Not much to ask for, right? *wink* But I can't tell you how happy I was to come across this fic when I decided that I missed my favorite pairing. It really has been an excellent story and it's so fun to read your own blend of word choice (it's a European thing, as an American I can never hope to master the proper use of "swan into a room", "rubbish" and what was the other word you used...idr, it was something brilliant. You use fantastic imagery and it's my opinion that you utilize the language as properly as possible. You do tend to use "avatar" very frequently to describe Kurama. You may want to consider a different term when you write about him. Btw, the lemon scenes are smokin'! I love that while there was definitely kissing, intense making out, etc, you definitely did NOT take the easy way out. You pulled Kagome away so many times after a make-out session, *I* was going to come undone, haha! I commend you for not making the over-done choice and throwing them in bed right away. It does seem too easy for Kagome to leave...espec. the scene after she left Yoko after she learned that Kuronue died. It seemed like she wasn't even bothered by leaving, which I thought a bit off. I do feel like the scene with Koenma in the library was not as well explained as it could've been...I still feel a bit confused with that bit. Your characterizations are good; I have a bit of trouble believing Hiei sometimes, but I concede that hey, this is a fanfiction and some disbelief must be suspended, ne? Plus, it makes him much more fun to work with than dull-old Grumpy Pants. ;) I love love love that you don't just sever the bond between Kagome and Inuyasha like it's nothing, because you're right, it's NOT. It's a huge deal, he's her first love! It only makes sense that she has such a hard time pulling away. I also like that Kagome gets time with both Youko and Kurama and that you make a definite separation between them and their personalities. I really like this idea that Kurama is softer, more hesitant. I was a bit confounded when you described Youko's fits of giggels (excellent blackmail material for Kagome someday, just fyi), but now I find it endearing. I wish I could've found this story earlier, but you know what? I don't know that I could've waited patiently enough for the update! I'm glad I've come into the story at this point...it lets me read with a steady flow (and trust me, since I started this fic yesterday, I've done nothing but read it...Well, I did the dishes. But that's about it). All in all, very good story. Well written and planned out, executed very nicely. Good sentence structure and descriptions that are always illustrative (that avatar thing is my only complaint), unique plot line, and follows the characters as truly, I think, as is possible, considering this is a crossover fic. Good job! I can't wait to read more, so good luck with your University stuff...I feel your pain, I'm a 2nd year at my University and I've had to do a 19,000 some word research paper. Gag. Trust me, I understand, I really do. Should I kiss your forehead now for emphasis? hehehe Best wishes, hope to read more soon!
| Title: Mind blowing captivating!!
Reviewed By: Eris of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2010 14:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It has wonderful and exciting to read! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Happy writing!!
| Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 02:26 EDT
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Oh sweetie! We certainly understand how all of that goes. Thank you for letting us know that you're still sticking with it, though! That's enough for me :) We've been with you this long, and I can guarantee I'll be here until the end. I just love your style of writing. But for heaven's sake! Spend some time with the people who love and support you. That's important, too. Your fans will still love you when you get back to us. Keep on keeping on! Good luck with finals! Kick their collective butts! See you again on the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: LustfulBeast [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 01:21 EDT
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I almost died when you gave us the little preview, it just shows how much I love your story :3. It's good to know that you will never give up this fic, that just tells me the wait will be worth my while lol. Thanks!:)
| Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2010 18:38 EDT
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hey! i know how stressfull school can be, especially with a degree in English. Im a literature major so i feel your pain. this is probably one of my favorite fanfics of all times and i just wanted to thank you for your dedication. i can't wait to read more!
| Reviewed By: vikay09 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2010 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:| I think i nearly cried.
| Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 23:56 EDT
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Bah, I hope you haven't abandoned this storyy! Update soon? Onegai~
| Reviewed By: DoubleZ On: March 03, 2010 22:27 EST
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UPDATE!!!!!!!! wahhhhhhhh no but ur good jst plz update so i know u havn't abandoned ur work
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