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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 20:41 EST
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You do understand your theory about hanyou being sterile is frightenly sound? We kinda tending to forget, that, after all, youkai's (mind you, I'm talking here only about youkai, not about oni or other kind of japanese demons) humanoid form is just *assumed* and, in reality, a human and a youkai have a lot less in common than a horse and a donkey, so, it wouldn't be that surprising, if their progeny wouldn't be able to reproduce...
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 20:16 EST
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Please, don't aplogize! We all know you are updating the story ASAP and, while it would be *really* nice to see this updated weekly (dreamly: or daily... ^_~), RL is far more important than fiction. Don't worry, we are the adult people here, we understand.^_^
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 02:07 EST
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Wow, this chapter was better and did contain more detail! ^^ I enjoyed it very much. Hmmm..seems Kagome's choices are clear, Inuyasha or Kurama. That's a tough choice the way you have it set up, although personally there's a special place in my heart for dog-boy, lol. He just needs to get his act together before Kurama steals Kagome away before he gets the chance to blink! Let's hope Inuyasha is not sterile. ;)
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Reviewed By: Elemental_dea (not logged in) On: November 22, 2006 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh wow i loved the new chapter! it took me awhile to get to it but i am so happy i did. it was weird b/c we just finished the whole edoplasmic reticulum/ cellular respiration stuff so i actually understood what that was talking about! *gasp* please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: jj On: November 22, 2006 19:41 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! LOVE IT!!!! keep writing, it's soooooooo interesting!!!! im a fan of your fanfics though!!!!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 09:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. Genes is my thing ^_^. Im gonna be a geneticist ^_^. LOL. Poor Inu possibly shooting blanks ~_~. Thanx for the shout out thingy ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: November 20, 2006 19:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv the story, and I hope this is a Kagome/Kurama pairing and so you know about Yoko. During the Dark Tournament Yoko had four tails as a B-Class Demon. After Yusuke's Death he jumped to A-Class.Thats five, but in the Demon World Tournament he went to upper A-Class giving him six lovely tails. Hope this helps. I can't wait for the rest of the group to pop up. Fox Vixen
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 17:27 EST
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Great job! Update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 22:58 EST
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have i written a review for this yet? eh, i dont think so. great job by the way. and i learned punnet squarez, nvr thought of the possibilty that inu couldnt have children. how sad. sweet! a kiss.
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 18:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. That was somthing else, Kagome really was hyped up, and that little thing at the end was funny! Thanks for updating, and update again when you can. :)
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 00:48 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this chapter! Kurama's so darned sweet with Kagome, he just blows Inuyasha away. Comments/questions: Hiei woke up from being blasted by her powers feeling happy? Interesting. I was disappointed he left so soon, though. (Since this is a Kag/Kur story, I hope you don't pair Hiei off with anyone -- I love him with Kagome, too. And I can't wait to see what role he plays from here.) Mugoi wants to stir up some trouble between Kagome and Suuichi, ne? Can't wait to see how that plays out. Kagome was a more forward than usual when he was helping her study -- exhaustion, nerves, and coffee? I couldn't believe it when she told him she was imagining plaiting his hair. Too funny. (Hope she gets to!) And then she sat in his lap? And teased him about going to bed with her?!!? Is she going to be totally embarassed when she remembers she said and did those things tomorrow? Hanyou are sterile? Yikes! Is that going to come up again later? So glad Kurama kissed her, even if it DID take Youko prompting him to "Just do it!" Really loved it all! Hope you get a chance to update again soon!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 16:41 EST
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yay keep on writing i luv this story!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 16:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, babe, you have to update sooner than this. But I still love your story so...yeah...
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Reviewed By: XxhellzgurlxX [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 15:21 EST
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and yet agian another great chapter. u never seem to stop amazing me i loved it just like all the others. PLZ UPDATE!!! bu bye tell the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Fox_Hanyou On: November 09, 2006 02:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! i didnt even realize the time i stayed glued to teh screen to read it untill now *squeeks* ...... i need to go to sleep now. keep it up ^_^ i give it 2 thumbs up!
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