| "A Sacred Treasure and a Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: panarican On: July 12, 2006 18:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv luv luv this story. ic ant believe only a small amount of ppl reviewed this story so im writing u one since im guilty of reading stories and not leaving reviews ^_^' keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice lemon! the story is really coming along well keep it up.~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: lyv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 17:24 EDT
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I am still enjoying your story. Thank you for the time and effort you take to share your talent with us.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far keep it up!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 03:05 EDT
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update , update, update! this story is awsome i love it!!!
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Reviewed By: Heartsbreak-kris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 04:26 EDT
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I like the story and how it's written. Good job and please continue it, I would like it see some more relationships blossom ^__^
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Reviewed By: SisSar1535 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 16:42 EDT
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This is a really good story, and it is nicely written, which is deffinetly a plus. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: xxINUxx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 01:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really love this story! Keep up the good work, please!
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Reviewed By: MaryJade-Inviduous [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 20:18 EDT
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I like this story more the longer I read it. Thanks for putting up so many new chapters so quickly. Great job :)
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Reviewed By: kenpanyoung [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job...pls update soon...
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Title: a sacred treasure and a hanyou
Reviewed By: little butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 10:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the fact that kagomes working in a strip clud its so unlike her
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-obsessed167 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 20:12 EDT
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YAY!!! Haha thanks so much for putting up the real chapter 6 and the new chapter! Well it's official: I'm addicted to this story. One question though. I thought Inuyasha was some sort of business man. What exactly was he doing there in that room(i dunno what to call it) with Kagome? K well thanks again for updating and I'll see ya next chapter.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 10:53 EDT
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I remember reading this story a while ago on AFF and I enjoyed it soo much. I'm enjoying reading it more the second time around. Hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-obsessed167 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one story that I definately enjoy reading. It isn't like the other stories in which Kagome is a stripper. "A Sacred Treasure and a Hanyou" gives off a more sensusous feel. There is also the fact that Kagome refuses to succumb to Inuyasha's wishes that makes the plot even more intriguing. For a first fanfic, you've done exectpionally well compared to others that I've read. No offense, but I think that a mistake was made when you updated the chapters. Chapter 5 "Almost..." and Chapter 6 "...Caught" are the same. So if it was a mistake, please put up the real chapter 6 soon because I'm so anxious to read it. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: MaryJade-Inviduous [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 21:57 EDT
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Interesting concept and I really wanna see where this could go. You've got a great way of helping the reader visualize your story. :)
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